Chapter 1 - the dream
Submitted March 28, 2007 Updated March 28, 2007 Status Incomplete | hope you like this |
Chapter 1 - the dream
Chapter 1 - the dream
This is not Bram Stokers Dracula and most definitely not Joss Wiedens Buffy The Vampire Slayer. This is a story of
It was a cold dark night. She walked alone. Her short red hair pulled, loosely, into a braid. Her vibrant green eyes were shaking, not only from the cold but also by the fear. Her skin was white and her nose was speckled by the lightly dusted freckles.
It was early 18th century and she was alone in the night. She was soon to wed and desperately couldnt wait. She found who she had discovered to be the man she wanted with love and lust. He was surely the man for her. He was handsome, strong. And she, a duchess, believed him to be the one.
But the night was so eerie, and with that feeling, came a sense of vulnerability. She walked past the woods and out of the shadows came a young man. He could be not much older then she. He appeared seven-teen&or maybe eighteen. And I shall repeat, appears.
His eyes were as dark as can be. His skin pail and soft looking. His hair was as dark as ebony. He had an impure sense to him, as if he was tainted by the devil himself. Not dead, nor alive. His teeth were white as could be, pointed at the fangs. He stood there smiling.
The fog that surrounded the forest made the scene seem, in more ways then one, uncanny. The girl continued to walk past. The boy moved stealthily behind her. As she was walking she hadnt noticed that he was in the wake of her.
In a solitary second he seized her shoulder, curved her cranium to the side and enforced his fangs into her neckline. He began to drain he blood. Her fearful screams of pain were no more than heard by the sinister ravens of the darkness. The birds began to call and chant. They took to the air to leave the mysterious sight that even they were afraid of. The vampire.
She laid sleeping. Her eyes afraid to open from her dream. What if it hadnt been a dream, but a niht mare& a vision& a prediction. She was frightened. She was unsure, anxios..
It was a cold dark night. She walked alone. Her short red hair pulled, loosely, into a braid. Her vibrant green eyes were shaking, not only from the cold but also by the fear. Her skin was white and her nose was speckled by the lightly dusted freckles.
It was early 18th century and she was alone in the night. She was soon to wed and desperately couldnt wait. She found who she had discovered to be the man she wanted with love and lust. He was surely the man for her. He was handsome, strong. And she, a duchess, believed him to be the one.
But the night was so eerie, and with that feeling, came a sense of vulnerability. She walked past the woods and out of the shadows came a young man. He could be not much older then she. He appeared seven-teen&or maybe eighteen. And I shall repeat, appears.
His eyes were as dark as can be. His skin pail and soft looking. His hair was as dark as ebony. He had an impure sense to him, as if he was tainted by the devil himself. Not dead, nor alive. His teeth were white as could be, pointed at the fangs. He stood there smiling.
The fog that surrounded the forest made the scene seem, in more ways then one, uncanny. The girl continued to walk past. The boy moved stealthily behind her. As she was walking she hadnt noticed that he was in the wake of her.
In a solitary second he seized her shoulder, curved her cranium to the side and enforced his fangs into her neckline. He began to drain he blood. Her fearful screams of pain were no more than heard by the sinister ravens of the darkness. The birds began to call and chant. They took to the air to leave the mysterious sight that even they were afraid of. The vampire.
She laid sleeping. Her eyes afraid to open from her dream. What if it hadnt been a dream, but a niht mare& a vision& a prediction. She was frightened. She was unsure, anxios..
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Phantomdragoness on March 27, 2007, 9:06:23 PM
wow, very interesting so farorianajones on October 13, 2010, 3:09:34 PM
orianajones on
i may add to it later but it will probably be a while.Heatherenie on June 13, 2007, 1:25:36 PM
Heatherenie on
I love the vivid details. I could imagine it so well. I'd call it a beautifully put story. I'd love to read the rest.orianajones on October 13, 2010, 3:09:06 PM
orianajones on
thankyou