Chapter 1 - Darkness
Submitted October 2, 2005 Updated October 2, 2005 Status Incomplete | It's a poem. Actualy it's a poem I made for my dutch class but I made an english translation.
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Chapter 1 - Darkness
Chapter 1 - Darkness
Darkness
It’s dark.
Around me I don’t see anything.
Oh, wait there’s a light.
Who’s there?
I’m coming.
Wait for a moment.
Why can’t I get closer.
I hear some loud noises.
The light is getting smaller.
The noise get’s lauder.
What’s happening.
The light went out.
It’s dark again.
Why’s the light gone?
The noise disappears.
But the light is not coming back.
I open my eye’s.
Where am I?
A hospital?
Why can’t I feel my legs?
I see a man with his eyes red.
He says something.
There was a bomb at your place.
Your mom is dead.
It’s dark.
Around me I don’t see anything.
Oh, wait there’s a light.
Who’s there?
I’m coming.
Wait for a moment.
Why can’t I get closer.
I hear some loud noises.
The light is getting smaller.
The noise get’s lauder.
What’s happening.
The light went out.
It’s dark again.
Why’s the light gone?
The noise disappears.
But the light is not coming back.
I open my eye’s.
Where am I?
A hospital?
Why can’t I feel my legs?
I see a man with his eyes red.
He says something.
There was a bomb at your place.
Your mom is dead.
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Kupo on November 14, 2005, 9:07:42 AM
Kupo on
thats really good. kinda weird like pro poems are... i'm not sure if that's good or bad...Saria-chan on November 5, 2005, 8:47:42 PM
Saria-chan on
It's a good poem!!, a little sad tho.Keep up the good work! ^^
PureDark on November 5, 2005, 6:23:40 PM
PureDark on
Wow... your drawing are great, and you also know how to write good poems!