Chapter 1 - Nullify
Submitted July 24, 2004 Updated July 24, 2004 Status Incomplete | I wrote this for my friend's band. Please comment.
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Chapter 1 - Nullify
Chapter 1 - Nullify
Deep in the darkness
Darker than night
Heaveir than metal
Useless is sight
The air is stale
Like filth and death
Like crunching bones
Like corpse's breath
In the stillness
The vigilant trees wait
And smile and scheme
In thickening hate
The undead
Lay waiting to die
The hidden curse
The unspoken lie
The unspoken whisper
Nullify
Darker than night
Heaveir than metal
Useless is sight
The air is stale
Like filth and death
Like crunching bones
Like corpse's breath
In the stillness
The vigilant trees wait
And smile and scheme
In thickening hate
The undead
Lay waiting to die
The hidden curse
The unspoken lie
The unspoken whisper
Nullify
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Roxygirl18114 on April 1, 2005, 4:17:28 PM
Quite interesting indeed...one tip-seperate the stanzes(I suck at spelling, sue me) so it is a bit less confusing. So yeah...very disturbing which makes it very good. Keep up the intriging work..._I_See_Stupid_People on July 25, 2004, 5:14:35 PM
FREAKY BUT GOOD
REALLY GOOD
^_^
JILL
Vampire_Elf on July 24, 2004, 12:25:14 PM
Vampire_Elf on
WOW!!! !your good at peoms!!! you should write more!!! i hope you have fun on FAC!!! :D Vampire_Elf