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Chapter 1 - bunni

an animal cruelty poem for sliver

Chapter 1 - bunni

Chapter 1 - bunni
i lay in this cell,
near dying and so weak,
all you humans think oh well,
but my blood it still seeps,
im the test-bunny,
that u test makeup on,
all u care about is money,
for i will soon be gone,
no name but a number,
number 973,
i will soon be in an eternal slumber,
all the things you do to me,
the wire it it does slice,
and ever so deep,
it must be nice,
you have no need to weep,
all these needles they shot,
right through my skin,
although you think not,
this must be a sin,
all these things you inject,
my head beats like a gong,
now you will have to disect,
to see what has gone wrong,
now i lay here,
and slowly wither away,
my death it grows near,
now i would like to say:
humans are pathetic,frackING SICK FREAKS!
IT SHALL SOON BE JUDGEMENT DAY!

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fart_squisher on September 22, 2005, 2:01:59 PM

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fart_squisherumm... you've got a good plot there, but your meter is all over the place (sorry!)
really, you should trade meter for rhyme, because poems are more effective if they have meter - even if they dont rhyme

really good concept though!!! i like!!

Rei_Anul_Sama on October 22, 2004, 7:46:07 AM

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Rei_Anul_Sama*cries* *favs* love it! though it is sad... i feel deep sorrow for any animal who has to endure this...*cries*

ratbrat on August 23, 2004, 2:43:31 AM

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ratbrathey thanks...i really got into this one.....it means alot to me to know you guys understand!

darkdesire on August 22, 2004, 11:46:56 PM

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darkdesireWow...It's meaning full,have ya ever thought of putting this in a news paper,cause it really gets the word accross.It's very true,*glares at evil companies whom still test on animals*And the damn government don't help either,ya'd think they'd stop the madness...nope!!Anyway,wicked job on this one!!

The_Oogie_Boogie_Man on June 12, 2004, 3:28:24 PM

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The_Oogie_Boogie_ManOn nights like this, I thank God I'm a Boogie Man.
^-^
Brilliant poetry
*runs off to free suffering animals*
whee!!
--Oogie Boogie

CalicoChan on May 30, 2004, 3:20:10 AM

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CalicoChanthats beautiful ^_^
lol, i was arrested a few weeks ago for protesting against animal experiments outside the british heart(less) foundation. thats like the 10th time -_- ....
great poem!

Sliver on May 18, 2004, 6:39:14 AM

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Sliverdisgustingly beautiful, ITs depressing that this kinda stuff really dose happen, but it gives a little bit of hope that people out their care about animals and areworking to change things

I applaud you

DarkDusk on May 16, 2004, 8:15:45 AM

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DarkDusk0.0 +faves yes who are humans to think they can be so cruel to animals animals are truelly the better species oh I can't wait for the day that the human race is wiped off the face of the earth good job I love this poem