Cruelty

umm... you've got a good plot there, but your meter is all over the place (sorry!)
really, you should trade meter for rhyme, because poems are more effective if they have meter - even if they dont rhyme

really good concept though!!! i like!!

*cries* *favs* love it! though it is sad... i feel deep sorrow for any animal who has to endure this...*cries*

hey thanks...i really got into this one.....it means alot to me to know you guys understand!

Wow...It's meaning full,have ya ever thought of putting this in a news paper,cause it really gets the word accross.It's very true,*glares at evil companies whom still test on animals*And the damn government don't help either,ya'd think they'd stop the madness...nope!!Anyway,wicked job on this one!!

On nights like this, I thank God I'm a Boogie Man.
^-^
Brilliant poetry
*runs off to free suffering animals*
whee!!
--Oogie Boogie

thats beautiful ^_^
lol, i was arrested a few weeks ago for protesting against animal experiments outside the british heart(less) foundation. thats like the 10th time -_- ....
great poem!

disgustingly beautiful, ITs depressing that this kinda stuff really dose happen, but it gives a little bit of hope that people out their care about animals and areworking to change things

I applaud you

0.0 +faves yes who are humans to think they can be so cruel to animals animals are truelly the better species oh I can't wait for the day that the human race is wiped off the face of the earth good job I love this poem