Chapter 1 - Can I still go on?
Submitted August 10, 2004 Updated August 10, 2004 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 1 - Can I still go on?
Chapter 1 - Can I still go on?
Can I still Go On
One second delayed
And now their late
Was I wrong
And can life still go on
And now it’s swimming in my head
That because of me you’re dead
But now I see you in my mind
That here is were I leave you behind
Life must go on
Because now you’re gone
One second delayed
And now their late
Was I wrong
And can life still go on
And now it’s swimming in my head
That because of me you’re dead
But now I see you in my mind
That here is were I leave you behind
Life must go on
Because now you’re gone
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Black_Wolf_Leader on March 28, 2005, 11:24:16 AM
I don't like poetry but thats awsome.FAVS.The_Vampire_Queen on February 18, 2005, 8:12:04 AM
Very dark and deep in meaning. I like poems like this. Very good job. *faves*BlackWolf on August 11, 2004, 8:50:01 AM
BlackWolf on
very neat ^^red_wolf_hiaro on August 11, 2004, 2:41:04 AM
with that i must agree it does suck when no one reads your work