Chapter 1 - Undertones
Submitted January 13, 2005 Updated January 13, 2005 Status Incomplete | Well i wrote this when i was really sad its about a friend of mine or at least i hope shes my friend...well neways please comment
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Chapter 1 - Undertones
Chapter 1 - Undertones
Undertones
There was a message that you left
The red pours from you nails
The hole in my heart is growing bigger
With each passing day.
The bells ring escapes through the crack in the door.
Ribbons are wrapped around your wrist
You left me a message:
Dont leave me behind
There was a message that you left
The red pours from you nails
The hole in my heart is growing bigger
With each passing day.
The bells ring escapes through the crack in the door.
Ribbons are wrapped around your wrist
You left me a message:
Dont leave me behind
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_secrets_screaming_to_speak_ on January 22, 2005, 2:30:06 AM
really nice! i like your poems a lot! thanks for commenting on mine ^_^ im adding a new one today if youd care to read it ^_^forbidden_child on January 21, 2005, 10:15:05 AM
Thank you for commenting on my poem!!! You are very good writer and artist and you have true talent for what you do! I hope you write more soon!!! ^^girlinpink2 on January 13, 2005, 11:29:05 AM
girlinpink2 on
Thank you for commenting on my poem!! Of course I will comment on yours. I really like the use of imagery. The poem is very symbolic, and I like that. It's very good. I understand it. ^_^ I think it's absolutely wonderful. Great job! Write more!