Chapter 6 - Return of the Nightmare Dream Center
Submitted July 18, 2005 Updated November 28, 2005 Status Incomplete | What would happen of two human girls became Shinzo Guardians? Will they save the two worlds: Enterra and Earth? Find out in this multi-episode book chronicling the adventures of Shinzo Fangirls! Contains original characters, and other stuff like that
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Chapter 6 - Return of the Nightmare Dream Center
Chapter 6 - Return of the Nightmare Dream Center
Okay, before I begin....here are the ages for all of the characters!
Sago: 15
Sav: 14
Maddie and Mushra: 13
So....yeah!
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*Our story takes us on another road trip.....*
Sav: SQUEEEE!!! ROAD TRIP!!!
Maddie: That's what you said five minutes ago, Sav!
Mushra: Where are we going, exactly?
Sago: Well.....I dunno.....I've heard of a village that has an inn that we can stay at!
Maddie: Sounds good! What's it called?
*at the inn*
Sav: The Cockroach Inn?
Sago: Yep! Best of the town, too!
Mushra: Best? You mean worst, right?
Sago: That's what it said on the brochure......
Sav: Joy! Well.....I hope the inside is better!
*at the reception desk*
Sago: Hi! 2 rooms, please!
Reception Clerk: Are you four together?
Sav: Yes.....
RC: Well....you should be in the same room.....
Mushra: NO WAY!!!
Maddie: I got this, Mushra.......exactly what would the cost be?
RC: 1 coin for all of you to fit in one.....500 for 2 rooms.
Sago: That's a little extreme.......fine, we'll do the 1 room.
RC: Here's your key! Thanks for staying.
*in the room*
Sav: ONE COIN FOR THIS????? ITS AS BIG AS MY BATHROOM!!!!
Maddie: Yeah really!
Sago: Well....who's sleeping in the....wait a second, there is no bed! We've been ripped off!
Mushra: Well, at least it was cheap! Besides....I WONT be sleeping in the bathroom tonight!
Sav: *gets a ton of blank stares* What?
*Randomly, at....say......4:30 IN THE MORNING, Mushra (in his sleep of course) yanks Sago's helmet off, revealing his....
LIGHT BLUE HAIR?????!!!!??????*
Sago: MUSHRA!!! Keep your dreams to yourself, would you?
Maddie: Wait.....your hair was blue not blonde! SAV DOESN'T KNOW THAT!!!!
Sago: Oh no! I forgot she didn't know that I dyed my hair last week!
*Suddenly, Sav walks out of the bathroom*
Sav: WAS THAT A FORM OF THE PULLING OFF OF SAGO'S HELMET THAT I JUST HEARD?????
Maddie and Sago: NO!!!
Sav: Can I join you?
Maddie and Sago: NO!!!
Sav: Fine then! *slams the bathroom door*
Sago: That was way too close!
*you can tell I've seen Nightmare Dream Central....anyways....2 hours later*
Sav: WOOHOO!!!! Sun's up! Waffles are downstairs! YAY!
Sago: What about the pancakes I fix at the base?
Sav: Oh they rock, but WAFFLES ROCK AS WELL!!!!!
Mushra: Someone's hyper this morning.....
Maddie: What did you expect? The queen of boredom?
Sav: Yeah! At least I'm not that!
Sago: I think we should hit the road. Besides....we can run into a Hardees and get bisquits!
Sav: Well......ok!
*on the road*
Sago: I don't see a Hardees yet.
Mushra: Maybe we should turn around....I mean...there's nothing here except *gets hit by a flying piece of paper* FFFMMMMFFFMMM!!!!
Maddie: Hey! Free tickets to the Shinzo Dream Center!
Sago: They rebuilt it? Cool!
Sav: I.....um--
Sago: What is it, Sav?
Sav: I don't think we should go.....I have a bad feeling about this....
Maddie: Aww...c'mon, Sav! It's an amusement park of all things!
Sago: Yeah, Maddie's right. After all, we deserve a break! *winks* Right Sav?
Sav: *tries to keep from squealing and fainting and other fangirlish stuff.....and winks back!* Oh yeah! Lets go!
*at the dreamcenter.....*
All: WOW!!!
Maddie: It's so beautiful!
Sav: And shiny!
Mushra: What are you guys waiting for? Park the vehicles and let's rock this place!
Maddie: It seems like we're the only ones here though......
Sav: WHO CARES?? That's what makes the parks more fun!
Sago: This is gonna be fantastic! Which ride should we do first?
Sav: How about....the Super-Coaster 2000?
*about an hour later.......they're on these ridiculously wierd hologram-projector thingies...and in different costumes from different time periods*
Sago: Nice outfit, Mushra!
Mushra: *in a sailor-girl outfit* AAAAH!!! *jumps off*
Sago: *in....versailles-modern outfit? and a wig* Check me out.....*puts on wierd english-type accent*a goatee to go with the mustache, dontcha think, Sav?
Sav: *in medieval outfit* WHY ARE YOU ASKING ME?????
Sago: *normal accent* I dunno.....
Sav: FEAR MY FAN!!! *thwacks Sago with fan*
Sago: Oww! >< *rubs back*
Maddie: *in black cat outfit* Ha ha!
Sav: Hey, what's that room over there?
Maddie: Let's check it out!
*in a different room without the hologram projector thingies*
Sago: It says here that this is the globe of Enterra. Touch a location, and you can see what's going on there right now!
Maddie: Cool! I wanna try........here! *pokes a place that looks like Scotland*
*suddenly the room puts on an awesome hologram of the countrysides of Scotland*
Sav: WOW!!! Looks just like the countryside that I've seen!
Mushra: Neat! It feels like we're actually here.
Sago: Let's try.......here! *pokes a place that looks like New York City*
*The countryside morphs into a massive city....but it's being destroyed!*
Maddie: OH NO!!!
Sav: What's happening?!
Mushra: It's total destruction! Nightmare central!
Sago: Let's get out of here!
*They leave the dreamcenter....only to find the outside in TOTAL DESTRUCTION!!!!*
Sav: What happened?
Maddie: I dunno!
Mushra: This is crazy......hey!
Sago: What is it, Mushra?
Mushra: I never noticed the waterfall over there.....
Sago: I think we've been TRICKED!!!
Nega Kirby: That's right, enterran!
*gigantuanormous red kirby walks in front of them*
Sav: Who are YOU???
Nega Kirby: I'm the Negakirby of Enterra!
Maddie: What are you doing here?
NK: They banished me from Dreamland because I created nightmares.
Mushra: Are you asking for a CHALLENGE???
NK: Yeah, why?
Mushra: HAAAAAAAAA!!! *thwacks NK with spear, but gets knocked back reeeeeeeeeally hard*
Maddie: MUSHRA!!
Mushra: You guys....I'm fine.....I just cant f-fight....
Sago: Well.......HYDRO POWER!!!
Sav: SPEED OF LIGHTNING!!!
Maddie: SWIFTNESS OF AIR!!!
*the three hyperform!*
NK: Ha ha! You three can't stop me!
Sav: But I probably could! *charges at NK, but also gets knocked back*
Sago: SAV!!!!!
Sav: Chill, Sago! *dusts herself off* I'm fine....
NK: Fools! *turns into quicksilver*
Sago: This kirby's evil, and its a shapeshifter to boot!
Sav: Thank you, captain obvious....
Sago: What did you call me?
Sav: Nothing!
*the three fly off to get away from NK, and land in a forest*
Maddie: That was close!
Sago: *puts Mushra near a tree* Yeah, really. Sav, are you sure you're alright?
Sav: Yes, Sago.....
NK: Fools again! Why are you trying to run when you can't stop me?
Sago: WATER DRAGON!!! *creates water dragon*
NK: *jumps into dragon which turns into quicksilver*
Sav, Maddie, Sago: GASP!!!
NK-infused Water Dragon: *attacks Sago*
Sago: Ow.....
Sav: NO!!!
Maddie: WIND TUNNEL!!! *creates wind tunnel, but it doesnt work against NK*
Sav: Sago....please.......*her hands glow*
Maddie: Sav?
NK: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha....
Sav: *unleashes energy* LIGHTNING DRAGON!!!!!!!!!!!! *creates a lightning dragon*
NK: .....hahahahaha--huh? *gets shocked and turns into a star in the distance*
Sago: *wakes up in time to see the lightning dragon* Sav saved me?
Sav: *falls to her knees* Boy, why am I so exhausted all of a sudden?
Maddie: *faints*
Sago: Sav.....you just unleashed a lightning dragon!
Sav: I WHAAAT?!?!???
Mushra: *wakes up* uh......
Maddie: MUSHRA!! You're ok!
Sav: Let's go back to the base.
*at the base no longer in hyperform*
Sav: Tell, me....Sago....what happened back there?
Sago: Your powers are becoming stronger by the minute.....even Maddie's.
Maddie: Yeah? How come?
Sago: When you released that dragon, Sav, what were you feeling?
Sav: Anger! Raw anger!
Sago: Okay, Maddie?
Maddie: Same here!
Sago: Then that means your powers are related to your emotions.....with more practice, you can get the hang of this and use these attacks at will!
*long pause*
Mushra: Nice speech, Sago!
Sago: Thanks!
Maddie: Who wants ice cream?
Sav: YAY!!!!
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That ends this eppie.....yeah ^^
Sago: 15
Sav: 14
Maddie and Mushra: 13
So....yeah!
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*Our story takes us on another road trip.....*
Sav: SQUEEEE!!! ROAD TRIP!!!
Maddie: That's what you said five minutes ago, Sav!
Mushra: Where are we going, exactly?
Sago: Well.....I dunno.....I've heard of a village that has an inn that we can stay at!
Maddie: Sounds good! What's it called?
*at the inn*
Sav: The Cockroach Inn?
Sago: Yep! Best of the town, too!
Mushra: Best? You mean worst, right?
Sago: That's what it said on the brochure......
Sav: Joy! Well.....I hope the inside is better!
*at the reception desk*
Sago: Hi! 2 rooms, please!
Reception Clerk: Are you four together?
Sav: Yes.....
RC: Well....you should be in the same room.....
Mushra: NO WAY!!!
Maddie: I got this, Mushra.......exactly what would the cost be?
RC: 1 coin for all of you to fit in one.....500 for 2 rooms.
Sago: That's a little extreme.......fine, we'll do the 1 room.
RC: Here's your key! Thanks for staying.
*in the room*
Sav: ONE COIN FOR THIS????? ITS AS BIG AS MY BATHROOM!!!!
Maddie: Yeah really!
Sago: Well....who's sleeping in the....wait a second, there is no bed! We've been ripped off!
Mushra: Well, at least it was cheap! Besides....I WONT be sleeping in the bathroom tonight!
Sav: *gets a ton of blank stares* What?
*Randomly, at....say......4:30 IN THE MORNING, Mushra (in his sleep of course) yanks Sago's helmet off, revealing his....
LIGHT BLUE HAIR?????!!!!??????*
Sago: MUSHRA!!! Keep your dreams to yourself, would you?
Maddie: Wait.....your hair was blue not blonde! SAV DOESN'T KNOW THAT!!!!
Sago: Oh no! I forgot she didn't know that I dyed my hair last week!
*Suddenly, Sav walks out of the bathroom*
Sav: WAS THAT A FORM OF THE PULLING OFF OF SAGO'S HELMET THAT I JUST HEARD?????
Maddie and Sago: NO!!!
Sav: Can I join you?
Maddie and Sago: NO!!!
Sav: Fine then! *slams the bathroom door*
Sago: That was way too close!
*you can tell I've seen Nightmare Dream Central....anyways....2 hours later*
Sav: WOOHOO!!!! Sun's up! Waffles are downstairs! YAY!
Sago: What about the pancakes I fix at the base?
Sav: Oh they rock, but WAFFLES ROCK AS WELL!!!!!
Mushra: Someone's hyper this morning.....
Maddie: What did you expect? The queen of boredom?
Sav: Yeah! At least I'm not that!
Sago: I think we should hit the road. Besides....we can run into a Hardees and get bisquits!
Sav: Well......ok!
*on the road*
Sago: I don't see a Hardees yet.
Mushra: Maybe we should turn around....I mean...there's nothing here except *gets hit by a flying piece of paper* FFFMMMMFFFMMM!!!!
Maddie: Hey! Free tickets to the Shinzo Dream Center!
Sago: They rebuilt it? Cool!
Sav: I.....um--
Sago: What is it, Sav?
Sav: I don't think we should go.....I have a bad feeling about this....
Maddie: Aww...c'mon, Sav! It's an amusement park of all things!
Sago: Yeah, Maddie's right. After all, we deserve a break! *winks* Right Sav?
Sav: *tries to keep from squealing and fainting and other fangirlish stuff.....and winks back!* Oh yeah! Lets go!
*at the dreamcenter.....*
All: WOW!!!
Maddie: It's so beautiful!
Sav: And shiny!
Mushra: What are you guys waiting for? Park the vehicles and let's rock this place!
Maddie: It seems like we're the only ones here though......
Sav: WHO CARES?? That's what makes the parks more fun!
Sago: This is gonna be fantastic! Which ride should we do first?
Sav: How about....the Super-Coaster 2000?
*about an hour later.......they're on these ridiculously wierd hologram-projector thingies...and in different costumes from different time periods*
Sago: Nice outfit, Mushra!
Mushra: *in a sailor-girl outfit* AAAAH!!! *jumps off*
Sago: *in....versailles-modern outfit? and a wig* Check me out.....*puts on wierd english-type accent*a goatee to go with the mustache, dontcha think, Sav?
Sav: *in medieval outfit* WHY ARE YOU ASKING ME?????
Sago: *normal accent* I dunno.....
Sav: FEAR MY FAN!!! *thwacks Sago with fan*
Sago: Oww! >< *rubs back*
Maddie: *in black cat outfit* Ha ha!
Sav: Hey, what's that room over there?
Maddie: Let's check it out!
*in a different room without the hologram projector thingies*
Sago: It says here that this is the globe of Enterra. Touch a location, and you can see what's going on there right now!
Maddie: Cool! I wanna try........here! *pokes a place that looks like Scotland*
*suddenly the room puts on an awesome hologram of the countrysides of Scotland*
Sav: WOW!!! Looks just like the countryside that I've seen!
Mushra: Neat! It feels like we're actually here.
Sago: Let's try.......here! *pokes a place that looks like New York City*
*The countryside morphs into a massive city....but it's being destroyed!*
Maddie: OH NO!!!
Sav: What's happening?!
Mushra: It's total destruction! Nightmare central!
Sago: Let's get out of here!
*They leave the dreamcenter....only to find the outside in TOTAL DESTRUCTION!!!!*
Sav: What happened?
Maddie: I dunno!
Mushra: This is crazy......hey!
Sago: What is it, Mushra?
Mushra: I never noticed the waterfall over there.....
Sago: I think we've been TRICKED!!!
Nega Kirby: That's right, enterran!
*gigantuanormous red kirby walks in front of them*
Sav: Who are YOU???
Nega Kirby: I'm the Negakirby of Enterra!
Maddie: What are you doing here?
NK: They banished me from Dreamland because I created nightmares.
Mushra: Are you asking for a CHALLENGE???
NK: Yeah, why?
Mushra: HAAAAAAAAA!!! *thwacks NK with spear, but gets knocked back reeeeeeeeeally hard*
Maddie: MUSHRA!!
Mushra: You guys....I'm fine.....I just cant f-fight....
Sago: Well.......HYDRO POWER!!!
Sav: SPEED OF LIGHTNING!!!
Maddie: SWIFTNESS OF AIR!!!
*the three hyperform!*
NK: Ha ha! You three can't stop me!
Sav: But I probably could! *charges at NK, but also gets knocked back*
Sago: SAV!!!!!
Sav: Chill, Sago! *dusts herself off* I'm fine....
NK: Fools! *turns into quicksilver*
Sago: This kirby's evil, and its a shapeshifter to boot!
Sav: Thank you, captain obvious....
Sago: What did you call me?
Sav: Nothing!
*the three fly off to get away from NK, and land in a forest*
Maddie: That was close!
Sago: *puts Mushra near a tree* Yeah, really. Sav, are you sure you're alright?
Sav: Yes, Sago.....
NK: Fools again! Why are you trying to run when you can't stop me?
Sago: WATER DRAGON!!! *creates water dragon*
NK: *jumps into dragon which turns into quicksilver*
Sav, Maddie, Sago: GASP!!!
NK-infused Water Dragon: *attacks Sago*
Sago: Ow.....
Sav: NO!!!
Maddie: WIND TUNNEL!!! *creates wind tunnel, but it doesnt work against NK*
Sav: Sago....please.......*her hands glow*
Maddie: Sav?
NK: Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha....
Sav: *unleashes energy* LIGHTNING DRAGON!!!!!!!!!!!! *creates a lightning dragon*
NK: .....hahahahaha--huh? *gets shocked and turns into a star in the distance*
Sago: *wakes up in time to see the lightning dragon* Sav saved me?
Sav: *falls to her knees* Boy, why am I so exhausted all of a sudden?
Maddie: *faints*
Sago: Sav.....you just unleashed a lightning dragon!
Sav: I WHAAAT?!?!???
Mushra: *wakes up* uh......
Maddie: MUSHRA!! You're ok!
Sav: Let's go back to the base.
*at the base no longer in hyperform*
Sav: Tell, me....Sago....what happened back there?
Sago: Your powers are becoming stronger by the minute.....even Maddie's.
Maddie: Yeah? How come?
Sago: When you released that dragon, Sav, what were you feeling?
Sav: Anger! Raw anger!
Sago: Okay, Maddie?
Maddie: Same here!
Sago: Then that means your powers are related to your emotions.....with more practice, you can get the hang of this and use these attacks at will!
*long pause*
Mushra: Nice speech, Sago!
Sago: Thanks!
Maddie: Who wants ice cream?
Sav: YAY!!!!
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That ends this eppie.....yeah ^^
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