Chapter 8 - Ruins at Fenton Park
Submitted July 18, 2005 Updated November 28, 2005 Status Incomplete | What would happen of two human girls became Shinzo Guardians? Will they save the two worlds: Enterra and Earth? Find out in this multi-episode book chronicling the adventures of Shinzo Fangirls! Contains original characters, and other stuff like that
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Chapter 8 - Ruins at Fenton Park
Chapter 8 - Ruins at Fenton Park
Shinzo Fangirls:
Ruins of Fenton Park
Sav: ROAD TRIP!!!!
Maddie: -_-' Sav.......
Sav: What? I love road trips.
Mushra: When are we gonna stop for food? I'm hungry.
Sav: I actually brought an hour's supply of whipped nuttytastic chocomallow surprise bars...
Mushra: Never mind.....
*two hours later, it's getting late....the sky's already dark*
Sago: Hey, are those fireworks?
Sav: They ARE fireworks! It's a party!
Maddie: I wonder who's hosting it.....
Mushra: Do you think they'd let us in? I'm starving!
Sav: We'll just have to check it out!
*at the greenish cave-like thingy where the party is.....*
Sago: Wow! It really is a party!
Mushra: See if they'll let us in....
Maddie: Um...excuse me? We're travelers, and--
Random Firefly Enterran #1: WELCOME TO THE FESTIVAL!!!
Mushra: YAY!!!! I mean...thanks!
Sav: We're enterrans and--
Firefly Enterran #2: It doesnt matter if you're hyper enterran or not, come on in! We love travelers.
Sav: *whispers* They didnt say anything about humans......
Sago: *whispers* Don't worry about it, Sav....if they do attack us, we'll be ready.
Firefly Enterran #1: What is it, friends? It's quite alright with us if you stay a while...there's free food!
Sav: At least they like us enough to let us stay with them, and yet I'm still suspicious....
Sago: But hey, free food is free food!
*And so our heroes are welcomed with open arms into a random party. Who knows what could happen next?*
Sago: I actually like this festival! *digs around a massive pile of jewels*
Mushra: FINALLY! Some decent food!
Maddie: Do you think we should be going yet.....
Mushra: Are you kidding? This party is awesome!
Sav: Is that a dance dance mat? I wanna compete! *runs off to the dance mats*
Sago: A what? Oh! Those dance pads at the arcades that Sav likes so much! I wanna see! *runs off after Sav*
Mushra: Why don't we see what Sav and Sago are up to?
Maddie: All right! ^^
*at the dance mats, Sav just beat a firefly dance dance champion*
Sav: Anyone else wanna challenge me?
Sago: I'll take a whack at it!
Sav: Sago? I didn't know you did the dance dance game?
Sago: Actually, it's my first time....I wanna try it, to see if I'm good.
Sav: Bring it on!
Robotic speaker: ROUND ONE!
*some dance music plays, and Sav and Sago compete by touching the different arrows with their feet as they pass over the screen.*
Sago: *finishes perfectly with a front split* I win!
Sav: *misses it* But we've got another round!
Robotic speaker: ROUND TWO!
Maddie: GO SAV!!!!
Mushra: GO SAGO!!!!
Maddie: Who's side are you on?
Mushra: Do I wanna say?
Sav: I win this round!
Sago: Well, we've got another round left.....then we'll see who's the champ!
Robotic speaker: FINAL!!!
*really fast music plays, and Sav is able to land every step perfectly, and finishes with a roundoff. Sago misses practically every step, and finishes with a front split again*
Sav: I WIN!!! YAY!
Sago: Great game! By the way, how did you do that roundoff?
Sav: I did a roundoff? REALLY???
Maddie: Yeah!
Sav: I don't know.....
Firefly enterran #3: AAAAH!!! MONSTER ATTACK!!! THERE ARE MONSTERS AMONG US!!!
Sav: We've gotta run!
Mushra: But Sav! It's only the middle of the night!
Sago: Yeah...
Maddie: WE'RE LEAVING NOW!!!
Mushra and Sago: COMING!!!!!
*the foursome speed their hoverthingies out of the cave and over the water*
Sav: I wonder why they all ran away so fast?
Maddie: I really don't know....
Mushra: Hey, is that a ferris wheel?
Sav: IT IS A FERRIS WHEEL!!!
Sago: It's a bunch of ruins! From the past century!
Maddie: From our time....
Sago: But something doesn't look right.....
Sav: I agree.....and you remember when those firefly enterrans interrupted me when I was about to say we were enterrans and humans? Right before I said humans, too....
Maddie: So that trap was MADE FOR US?????
Mushra: And me and Sago too, looks like!
*suddenly, a bunch of fireflies shoot slingshots at the four*
Mushra: WHAT WAS THAT???
Sago: An ambush, what do you think?
Sav: LIGHTNING SPEAR!!! *throws a bolt at the ferris wheel, but misses*
Maddie: LOOK OUT ABOVE!!!
*a bunch of remote controlled birds drop rocks on our heroes*
Maddie: WIND BLAST!!! *shoots a blast of wind at the rocks and shields the four from massive pain*
Sav: Thanks, Maddie!
Maddie: ^^
Sago: SAV LOOK OUT!!!!!
*a giant swinging pirate ship breaks loose and is about to land on Sav*
Sav: Okay, train of thought, passion or fear, element, and....*creates a lightning scooter thingy to escape the massive ship*
*in the meanwhiles, the fireflies release a massive monster to go after the four*
Sav: Phew! That was way too close.
*Sav hears a high pitched scream that sounded oddly familiar in the background, and a splash*
Sav: WHAT WAS THAT????? *lightning scooter falls apart* NO WAY!!! *falls in the water* Where DID that scream come from? And where's Sago?
Maddie: *resurfaces* Sav! You alright?
Sav: I'm fine! Where's Mushra and Sago?
Maddie: Mushra flew away on his flying hoverpad, and Sago....did you not hear that scream?
Sav: Um....yeah, I....WHAT???? SAGO SCREAMED LIKE A GIRL????
Sago: *resurfaces* Who screamed like a girl?
Sav: NOBODY! Maybe me? I DONT KNOW!!!
Maddie: You think we should hyperform?
Sago: Not without Mushra....
Mushra: SAV!!! MADDIE!!!
*suddenly, these platforms rise from underwater, and trap Sav and Maddie in individual cages. Then, a firefly/human enterran flies to the cages*
Brandon: Human girls....why are you hanging with the enterrans?
Maddie: We're not ordinary humans....we're Shinzo Guardians!
Brandon: Is that so? Well, I was thinking that since you two have massive hyper power, I could use you in my army!
Maddie: You want us to be your annoying footsoldiers that do your every will? I DONT THINK SO!!!
Brandon: Well, it's the only plan I have....
Sav: NEVER WOULD ME OR MADDIE GO TO YOUR SIDE AND FIGHT!!! EVER!
Maddie: That's right!
Brandon: No one's gonna save you now....
Sago: I've got to save Sav......HYDRO POWER!!! *hyperforms*
Mushra: HYPER FLAME!!!! *hyperforms* You're going DOWN! *throws flames*
Sav: Hey, it's Mushra and Sago!
Brandon: WHAT??? THEY'RE HYPER ENTERRANS!!!
Sago: Stay away from my friends! WATER TORNADO!!! *shoots a blast of water from his hands* SAV! MADDIE! Hyperform!
Sav: Right! SPEED OF LIGHTNING! *hyperforms*
Maddie: SWIFTNESS OF AIR! *ditto*
Brandon: How can you two humans hyperform?
Sav: Let's just say it's a prophesy fulfilled by magic....LIGHTNING FUSION!!! *shoots an extremely powerful blast with her wand*
Maddie: And we're also on the side of good! WIND TUNNEL!!! *a wind vortex surrounds Brandon*
Brandon: AAAAARGH!!!! *starts to glow green* HYPER ILLUMINATION!!!! *hyperforms*
Sav: Great. He's a hyper-enterran too.
Firefly Enterran #1: FLEE, FIREFLIES!
Maddie: The fireflies were here? I never saw them...but you fireflies are smart. Go on, flee!
Mushra: And don't come back! Now...where were we...
Brandon: You seriously thought you would beat me? FORGET IT!!! In hyper form, I'm so much more powerful, its insane! Now, fear my wrath!
Sago: That's pretty much what every villain we've encountered says!
Sav: I agree. Who's up for a combo fusion?
*Sav creates a sphere of lightning, and Mushra, Maddie, and Sago create spheres of fire, air, and water*
Maddie: Ready?
Mushra: More than you know!
Sago: Let's do this!
Brandon: Huh?
Sav: NOW!!! HYPER GUARDIAN COMBO FUSION!!!! *shoots the blast of fire, water, wind, and lightning*
Brandon: NO WAY!!! *gets hit, and turns into a card*
Mushra: I'm not going to destroy the card....
Maddie: Why not?
Mushra: When you have a whole card, you can use it for pretty much anything, including absorb its power. Certain hovercrafts can absorb cards as well.
Sav: Cool!
*they all revert to regular form*
Sago: Let's get our hovercrafts. *uses remote key to get his scooter out of the water*
Sav: *ditto*
Maddie: *grabs hover skateboard*
Mushra: Where's mine? Oh, there it is! Let's go.
*the next morning...our heroes are on hoverthingies*
Sav: You know what I think? We should watch out for those who could be potential enemies. Even if they do have a dance dance mat....
Sago: I couldn't agree more....
Maddie: I think this has made us a stronger team.
Sav: Totally! We're, like, unstoppable!
Mushra: We're the SHINZO GUARDIANS--OW!!! *hits a cactus*
Sago: Nice flying, Mushra!
Maddie: Try actually looking up next time!
Sav: ^^
Mushra: >< Ow.....
*This ends our little eppy.....bye!*
Ruins of Fenton Park
Sav: ROAD TRIP!!!!
Maddie: -_-' Sav.......
Sav: What? I love road trips.
Mushra: When are we gonna stop for food? I'm hungry.
Sav: I actually brought an hour's supply of whipped nuttytastic chocomallow surprise bars...
Mushra: Never mind.....
*two hours later, it's getting late....the sky's already dark*
Sago: Hey, are those fireworks?
Sav: They ARE fireworks! It's a party!
Maddie: I wonder who's hosting it.....
Mushra: Do you think they'd let us in? I'm starving!
Sav: We'll just have to check it out!
*at the greenish cave-like thingy where the party is.....*
Sago: Wow! It really is a party!
Mushra: See if they'll let us in....
Maddie: Um...excuse me? We're travelers, and--
Random Firefly Enterran #1: WELCOME TO THE FESTIVAL!!!
Mushra: YAY!!!! I mean...thanks!
Sav: We're enterrans and--
Firefly Enterran #2: It doesnt matter if you're hyper enterran or not, come on in! We love travelers.
Sav: *whispers* They didnt say anything about humans......
Sago: *whispers* Don't worry about it, Sav....if they do attack us, we'll be ready.
Firefly Enterran #1: What is it, friends? It's quite alright with us if you stay a while...there's free food!
Sav: At least they like us enough to let us stay with them, and yet I'm still suspicious....
Sago: But hey, free food is free food!
*And so our heroes are welcomed with open arms into a random party. Who knows what could happen next?*
Sago: I actually like this festival! *digs around a massive pile of jewels*
Mushra: FINALLY! Some decent food!
Maddie: Do you think we should be going yet.....
Mushra: Are you kidding? This party is awesome!
Sav: Is that a dance dance mat? I wanna compete! *runs off to the dance mats*
Sago: A what? Oh! Those dance pads at the arcades that Sav likes so much! I wanna see! *runs off after Sav*
Mushra: Why don't we see what Sav and Sago are up to?
Maddie: All right! ^^
*at the dance mats, Sav just beat a firefly dance dance champion*
Sav: Anyone else wanna challenge me?
Sago: I'll take a whack at it!
Sav: Sago? I didn't know you did the dance dance game?
Sago: Actually, it's my first time....I wanna try it, to see if I'm good.
Sav: Bring it on!
Robotic speaker: ROUND ONE!
*some dance music plays, and Sav and Sago compete by touching the different arrows with their feet as they pass over the screen.*
Sago: *finishes perfectly with a front split* I win!
Sav: *misses it* But we've got another round!
Robotic speaker: ROUND TWO!
Maddie: GO SAV!!!!
Mushra: GO SAGO!!!!
Maddie: Who's side are you on?
Mushra: Do I wanna say?
Sav: I win this round!
Sago: Well, we've got another round left.....then we'll see who's the champ!
Robotic speaker: FINAL!!!
*really fast music plays, and Sav is able to land every step perfectly, and finishes with a roundoff. Sago misses practically every step, and finishes with a front split again*
Sav: I WIN!!! YAY!
Sago: Great game! By the way, how did you do that roundoff?
Sav: I did a roundoff? REALLY???
Maddie: Yeah!
Sav: I don't know.....
Firefly enterran #3: AAAAH!!! MONSTER ATTACK!!! THERE ARE MONSTERS AMONG US!!!
Sav: We've gotta run!
Mushra: But Sav! It's only the middle of the night!
Sago: Yeah...
Maddie: WE'RE LEAVING NOW!!!
Mushra and Sago: COMING!!!!!
*the foursome speed their hoverthingies out of the cave and over the water*
Sav: I wonder why they all ran away so fast?
Maddie: I really don't know....
Mushra: Hey, is that a ferris wheel?
Sav: IT IS A FERRIS WHEEL!!!
Sago: It's a bunch of ruins! From the past century!
Maddie: From our time....
Sago: But something doesn't look right.....
Sav: I agree.....and you remember when those firefly enterrans interrupted me when I was about to say we were enterrans and humans? Right before I said humans, too....
Maddie: So that trap was MADE FOR US?????
Mushra: And me and Sago too, looks like!
*suddenly, a bunch of fireflies shoot slingshots at the four*
Mushra: WHAT WAS THAT???
Sago: An ambush, what do you think?
Sav: LIGHTNING SPEAR!!! *throws a bolt at the ferris wheel, but misses*
Maddie: LOOK OUT ABOVE!!!
*a bunch of remote controlled birds drop rocks on our heroes*
Maddie: WIND BLAST!!! *shoots a blast of wind at the rocks and shields the four from massive pain*
Sav: Thanks, Maddie!
Maddie: ^^
Sago: SAV LOOK OUT!!!!!
*a giant swinging pirate ship breaks loose and is about to land on Sav*
Sav: Okay, train of thought, passion or fear, element, and....*creates a lightning scooter thingy to escape the massive ship*
*in the meanwhiles, the fireflies release a massive monster to go after the four*
Sav: Phew! That was way too close.
*Sav hears a high pitched scream that sounded oddly familiar in the background, and a splash*
Sav: WHAT WAS THAT????? *lightning scooter falls apart* NO WAY!!! *falls in the water* Where DID that scream come from? And where's Sago?
Maddie: *resurfaces* Sav! You alright?
Sav: I'm fine! Where's Mushra and Sago?
Maddie: Mushra flew away on his flying hoverpad, and Sago....did you not hear that scream?
Sav: Um....yeah, I....WHAT???? SAGO SCREAMED LIKE A GIRL????
Sago: *resurfaces* Who screamed like a girl?
Sav: NOBODY! Maybe me? I DONT KNOW!!!
Maddie: You think we should hyperform?
Sago: Not without Mushra....
Mushra: SAV!!! MADDIE!!!
*suddenly, these platforms rise from underwater, and trap Sav and Maddie in individual cages. Then, a firefly/human enterran flies to the cages*
Brandon: Human girls....why are you hanging with the enterrans?
Maddie: We're not ordinary humans....we're Shinzo Guardians!
Brandon: Is that so? Well, I was thinking that since you two have massive hyper power, I could use you in my army!
Maddie: You want us to be your annoying footsoldiers that do your every will? I DONT THINK SO!!!
Brandon: Well, it's the only plan I have....
Sav: NEVER WOULD ME OR MADDIE GO TO YOUR SIDE AND FIGHT!!! EVER!
Maddie: That's right!
Brandon: No one's gonna save you now....
Sago: I've got to save Sav......HYDRO POWER!!! *hyperforms*
Mushra: HYPER FLAME!!!! *hyperforms* You're going DOWN! *throws flames*
Sav: Hey, it's Mushra and Sago!
Brandon: WHAT??? THEY'RE HYPER ENTERRANS!!!
Sago: Stay away from my friends! WATER TORNADO!!! *shoots a blast of water from his hands* SAV! MADDIE! Hyperform!
Sav: Right! SPEED OF LIGHTNING! *hyperforms*
Maddie: SWIFTNESS OF AIR! *ditto*
Brandon: How can you two humans hyperform?
Sav: Let's just say it's a prophesy fulfilled by magic....LIGHTNING FUSION!!! *shoots an extremely powerful blast with her wand*
Maddie: And we're also on the side of good! WIND TUNNEL!!! *a wind vortex surrounds Brandon*
Brandon: AAAAARGH!!!! *starts to glow green* HYPER ILLUMINATION!!!! *hyperforms*
Sav: Great. He's a hyper-enterran too.
Firefly Enterran #1: FLEE, FIREFLIES!
Maddie: The fireflies were here? I never saw them...but you fireflies are smart. Go on, flee!
Mushra: And don't come back! Now...where were we...
Brandon: You seriously thought you would beat me? FORGET IT!!! In hyper form, I'm so much more powerful, its insane! Now, fear my wrath!
Sago: That's pretty much what every villain we've encountered says!
Sav: I agree. Who's up for a combo fusion?
*Sav creates a sphere of lightning, and Mushra, Maddie, and Sago create spheres of fire, air, and water*
Maddie: Ready?
Mushra: More than you know!
Sago: Let's do this!
Brandon: Huh?
Sav: NOW!!! HYPER GUARDIAN COMBO FUSION!!!! *shoots the blast of fire, water, wind, and lightning*
Brandon: NO WAY!!! *gets hit, and turns into a card*
Mushra: I'm not going to destroy the card....
Maddie: Why not?
Mushra: When you have a whole card, you can use it for pretty much anything, including absorb its power. Certain hovercrafts can absorb cards as well.
Sav: Cool!
*they all revert to regular form*
Sago: Let's get our hovercrafts. *uses remote key to get his scooter out of the water*
Sav: *ditto*
Maddie: *grabs hover skateboard*
Mushra: Where's mine? Oh, there it is! Let's go.
*the next morning...our heroes are on hoverthingies*
Sav: You know what I think? We should watch out for those who could be potential enemies. Even if they do have a dance dance mat....
Sago: I couldn't agree more....
Maddie: I think this has made us a stronger team.
Sav: Totally! We're, like, unstoppable!
Mushra: We're the SHINZO GUARDIANS--OW!!! *hits a cactus*
Sago: Nice flying, Mushra!
Maddie: Try actually looking up next time!
Sav: ^^
Mushra: >< Ow.....
*This ends our little eppy.....bye!*
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