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Chapter 1 - i blink

something i wrote when i was pissed...please comment and tell me if i should give up poetry lol

Chapter 1 - i blink

Chapter 1 - i blink


When my eyes are open, you can be my friend.

But every time I blink you've turned your back again.



I know you hear my pathetic, soundless plea,

but every time I blink I know you gave me up.

You only befriended me to see how much I suck.



You think you know it all, im a loser, poser, and fake.

But that's not enough, you need to make me break.



So you spare me a wave and a quick glance.

But you can't fool me I know you're fake for every time I blink you turn your back again.

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Darkdust_cookie on May 10, 2005, 2:41:06 AM

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Darkdust_cookieYou definetly shouldn't give up poetry. That was real good my poems sounded kinda bad compared 2 that.

Kaira on April 16, 2005, 9:45:26 AM

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Kairahey i love your poem i was wondering if i could try to turn it in to a song if you're wondering i'm sort of a singer so let me know if i caould use it for a song ok

Meowchi on March 17, 2005, 8:17:23 AM

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MeowchiAwwww *hugs sakura* I will be your friend! lol its a great poem dont give up poetry!

Lanfear on March 1, 2005, 3:14:20 PM

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Lanfearwow, defintely don't give up poetry!~!! besides, poetry comes in all kinds of forms, it doesn't have a fixed theme or anything!! well done keep it up, ps if you wanna read some more poetry you can look on my page. l8er Lanfear