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Chapter 4 - sasuke's decision and a fight

sasusaku story. mostly a present and flasback story. and sakura's adventure to come (after time skip- shippuuden)

rating for later chapters

Chapter 4 - sasuke's decision and a fight

Chapter 4 - sasuke's decision and a fight
*RECAP*
"hn, comeon naruto you want to stop me don't you?" she said teasing him

hmph good thing he didn't notice... well atleast not yet
she thought

*END RECAP*
oh gosh a fighting scene i'll do my best it's my first fighting scene i have to write i might post a picture later on and put a spoiler pic up too with this story! Xb
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sakura then griped his hand tighter and flung him to a wall *poof*

"a substitution jutsu" she exclamed

naruto runs up behind her and punches only for sakura to jump out of his way making him attack nothing but thin air. quickly he though

where could she have gone above, below, left, right? BAM! sakura punches the ground before her and it bursts up in the air taking naruto along with the ground making him hit the wall

"how about behind you naruto" she said

naruto hesitates to get up, but he didn't have much of a choice he leaped up and jumped out of sakura's way as she came charging ready to punch him but only punched air

she looks up and sees naruto heading for her and blocked his punch by grabing his wrist and throwing him to a wall only for him to get free from her grip and skids on the floor trying to stop himself.

I have to get sakura to stop. but i don't want to hurt her *doges a fistfull of punches* but i have to stop her naruto thought

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now with sasuke....

sasuke also decided to see for himself by going to sakura and just check up on her he just left right away packing nothing but telling orochimaru that he was going to go and head for an "erron"(sp?) so orochimaru decided to follow him a little bit and then finally figured out why he's on an erron

"so sasuke-kun you want to go back to konoha huh?" he remarked

"hn no wonder why i thought somebody was following me" sasuke said

"and yes i am going back to konoha for a little bit to see something" sasuke finished

"well don't you mean to see "someone"? if so this SOMEONE must be very special to you so special that maybe you like her" he started hinting off

"well then who do you think i'm going to go see?" sasuke asked

"no one else but the pink haired girl, her name is sakura right? now that i remember she was having tsunade teach her" he added

this is my chance to get the my arms fixed and be able to get sasuke to give up himself kukuku i guess i'll kill two birds with one stone orochimaru thought

"well then sasuke-kun if you want to go see her i'll ask you one thing and one thing only" her said

"now what is that you ask for?" sasuke asked him

"bring her back here to heal my arms and for a little fun" he finished

sasuke just looked at him he knew he wanted to do something else to her and he wasn't going to let it happen, but if he could atleast see her and if he brings her back he wouldn't let anything happen to her.

"very well then i'll bring her" sasuke said in a monotone

"that's a good boy now go along" orochimaru said

gosh that freak get's annoying and why does he call me sasuke-KUN only one person can call me that but i'll see her soon


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naruto finally get's the guts and comes up with a plan

he does some hand seals and yells out

"kage bunshin no jutsu"

"hn naruto i'm not sure were you are but i'll find you!" sakura exclamed

sakura then started punching, kicking, throwing kunai, and throwing naruto's all over the place *poof* *poof* *poof* *poof*

sakura satrted breathing heavily not knowing were the real naruto was untill

"RASENGAN!" and hit her in the back this time he got her!

*POOF!* .... or so he thought

"A SHADOW REPLICA!?!?!" exclamed naruto

so i finally see this was a plan to give her some time so that i wouldn't be able to catch up with her.

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"wow it's a good thing it was only a shadow replica or else i would've been toast" she said softly

"naruto.... you really have become stronger" she wispered amazed

naruto looked up and yelled out

"SAKURAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" he shouted

sakura turned away not wanting to see her friends face sad because of her. she then ran as fast as she could and went deeper and deeper into the forest untill the whole dark swallowed her up

she then thought i need to make my tracks as confusing as i possibly can knowing naruto he'll come looking or he'll tell someone and other ninja might look

she walked leaped all over the place making her trakes as confusing as she possibly could and went on her way

"sasuke-kun i'm coming" she said

out of the blue somebody cme out and said in a wireless walky-talkie (sp?)

"everything is going as planed the pink haired girl should make it you way in a little bit...... yes i know and hey don't get her yet she's still has to go see orochimaru so we can take him out you got it Itachi?" kisame said

"alright i'll folow the kunoichi" itachi said


END OF CHAPTER!
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wow i think i did a good job if i do say so myself! lol i thought might as well bring sasuke a little bit more in this chapter no? lolz well i'll try with the next one right now by brain storming!

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Symphoniaprincess101 on August 1, 2007, 10:53:53 AM

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Symphoniaprincess101uh-oh Sakura's in trouble now awsome story^^

luckylace222 on July 31, 2007, 12:54:45 AM

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luckylace222XD THE SUSPENSE!!!!! *Favs*

XxKayxKayxX on July 30, 2007, 1:05:49 PM

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XxKayxKayxXnicer chapter keep on writing =]

gaaralover1 on July 30, 2007, 10:38:33 AM

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gaaralover1WOW! and when you say take him out you mean kill him right

sasusakuAMOR on July 30, 2007, 10:41:32 AM

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sasusakuAMORyep! waddya think of it?