Chapter 1 - so alone
Submitted February 12, 2006 Updated February 12, 2006 Status Incomplete | well it a really sad poem i wrote. i dont know why, but i right sad poems even though im a happy person.
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Chapter 1 - so alone
Chapter 1 - so alone
So alone
There is to much hatred in the world, that’s its overpowering us
Tearing us apart
There is to much sadness in the world
Making us cry
And telling us to hold on
There’s to much loneliness in the word
Making us die
Killing us inside
But its ok
Because im always here for you
So don’t cry my love
Or hearts will always shine
There is to much hatred in the world, that’s its overpowering us
Tearing us apart
There is to much sadness in the world
Making us cry
And telling us to hold on
There’s to much loneliness in the word
Making us die
Killing us inside
But its ok
Because im always here for you
So don’t cry my love
Or hearts will always shine
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brinabunny on February 8, 2007, 9:02:15 AM
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this is true and is great. You have alot of talent in writing poemsDannyPhantomLover on February 13, 2006, 10:41:42 AM
awww dats so tru!!! lol yr good at writing poemsz..eva thought of putting them in a book or sumthin?? this is goodRage_the_demon_alchemist on February 12, 2006, 11:05:23 AM
whoa thats so sad but good! i like! but why the hell is nobody commenting on this!?can you read what happend on feb11. its true you know it happend here in my imagenation along with Fullmetal_D's