Chapter 1 - Forgotten Angel
Submitted November 1, 2007 Updated December 24, 2007 Status Incomplete | just a few random short stories that i kinda liked and my friends stole from me -curse them- and read to the people in the resturaunt.... they liked them really... and actually asked for copies i was really happy... and yet embarrassed....-.-"
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Chapter 1 - Forgotten Angel
Chapter 1 - Forgotten Angel
Her hair whipped with a slight russling sound.Matted and torn,but golden simplicity like none other. A single strand was like a ray of light
.It wissped about her slender body covering her flawless face.Two twinkling eyes of deep blue shown through.At that instant you would be caught in a slight trance.Though.... if you would just take your eyes away from hers you will see around her,torment.... blood drips from her delicate arms and hands wich hold her,cradeling her shaking body. No beautiful wings emerge from her back. Her face twisted in pain . Only her bright eyes shine. Showing no emotion known to mere mortals.... she sings with a honey smooth voice only heard on the wind. It rains...no light shows through the thick clouds... none to take her home... she is forgotten ... her wings ...wilted.... her hair... falling..... her complection .....drained... her eyes... still twinkling with dry tears that stopped pouring long ago.... her hope... gone.......
..This forgotten Angel has fallen and forever more,lies in darkness till light shows through the clouds,she will vanish into a dark abyss of sadness and despair................ a forgotten angel till the very end.....
.It wissped about her slender body covering her flawless face.Two twinkling eyes of deep blue shown through.At that instant you would be caught in a slight trance.Though.... if you would just take your eyes away from hers you will see around her,torment.... blood drips from her delicate arms and hands wich hold her,cradeling her shaking body. No beautiful wings emerge from her back. Her face twisted in pain . Only her bright eyes shine. Showing no emotion known to mere mortals.... she sings with a honey smooth voice only heard on the wind. It rains...no light shows through the thick clouds... none to take her home... she is forgotten ... her wings ...wilted.... her hair... falling..... her complection .....drained... her eyes... still twinkling with dry tears that stopped pouring long ago.... her hope... gone.......
..This forgotten Angel has fallen and forever more,lies in darkness till light shows through the clouds,she will vanish into a dark abyss of sadness and despair................ a forgotten angel till the very end.....
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sorrowfulsoul on November 1, 2007, 8:02:04 AM
ya.... emotional this is how feel sometimes.... just not a girl!!!!>_< sorry but you gotta say it's kinda okay..... it's sad though i thought of my parents and i almost felt like crying but i am older noe and need to act like a man.... even though sometimes i just want to cry for hours... but i have to hold it in........ is that unhealthy cause i gotta know...FreezingRain on November 16, 2007, 9:54:57 PM
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yeah it's unhealthy, but so is reading or drawing when you have a head ache or taking at least one ibuprfen(or however you spell it, i'd have to find the bottle)a week durring the summer. so yeah alot a things in this world are unhealthy. O an i'm doing a sience fair project on stress and i shal know what your problem is mwahaha!myartmaybebadbutatleastitry on November 3, 2007, 3:44:33 AM
It is unhealthy, but I do the same thing.sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 11:54:56 AM
arg..... thanx.....Phoenex360Gorillaz on November 2, 2007, 9:05:56 AM
Wows. This is really good, but you should work on your sentance formatting. Mix it up a bit, you know? And a few too many dots. ^.^ Other than that it was completely wonderful! Please update if you add more to this story; it would make a great plot point.sorrowfulsoul on November 16, 2007, 8:57:34 AM
dots are cool and fun!!!!^________^ ................................................sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 1:27:25 AM
heeee thanx... iknow my retarded computer wouldn't let me back space...-_-' i like dot!!!!XDFreezingRain on November 3, 2007, 7:15:28 AM
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The story is really goodmyartmaybebadbutatleastitry on November 3, 2007, 3:43:55 AM
That is really good ^_^ I lurv it!sorrowfulsoul on November 3, 2007, 11:55:28 AM
thanx!^_^