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An eleven-page story I wrote from January 2006 to January 2007, about the adventures of two teens, set in the year 2038. There are a few pictures that are supposed to be in it, and there's no paragraphing, but otherwise it's all there. Enjoy!

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - (full story)
Submitted: March 1, 2007 • Updated: March 1, 2007
Word count: 4853 • Size: 26k • Comments: 3 • views: 264

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RockLee9915 on March 3, 2007, 12:16:19 AM

RockLee9915 on (Chapter: 1)
RockLee9915i almost read the entire thing, but
1. it was too long
2. too many big words
3. you lost me at the word "megabus"
4. that gave me a massive headach
and
5. i keep having flashbacks o' last night...

RockLee9915 on March 3, 2007, 12:07:40 AM

RockLee9915 on (Chapter: 1)
RockLee9915dude!!! that i stepped on the gas thing is my line!!!

Irken_Akire on March 2, 2007, 7:33:16 AM

Irken_Akire on (Chapter: 1)
Irken_AkireWoah! Nice...
*whispers* DUDE! Don't say that skool name!