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A World of Sound

Hokay guys
Here is my college short story, tell me what you think or just read it for fun, but constructive criticism is always welcome :)



Chapter 1 - The Only Chapter
Submitted: October 25, 2007 • Updated: October 25, 2007
Word count: 2402 • Size: 12k • Comments: 0 • views: 188


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tears_of_manga on January 3, 2008, 8:59:43 AM

tears_of_manga on (Chapter: index)
tears_of_mangaNo, I definitely finished it. . . I don't know why you are only seeing about 100 words, because when I click on it, the entire thing shows up . . . I had trouble posting it the first time though so it could have something to do with that. Try viewing it again and if it doesn't work, leave another comment.

KeboFokohj on January 3, 2008, 5:46:47 AM

KeboFokohj on (Chapter: index)
KeboFokohjIt says that the story is 2402 words long but I can only see about 100, it ends off talking about light and music filling the church, I was wondering if you deleted the rest of the story or just never wrote it?