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Chapter 7 - It's Short Term..

Little bits and pieces that I could continue on. Critique, please, and recommend which one would best work for a story line.

Chapter 7 - It's Short Term..

Chapter 7 - It's Short Term..


Look in the mirror.

Good. Good, check the eyes, the face.

This is you. Say it with me: "This is me."

Good. Good job. Check the face...check near the neck...

Wait a minute. What are those scratches from? Poke at 'em, they didn't look like they were there before.

Well, nothing's there before is it? Twelve minutes and I'm a fracking vegetable. I won't remember this. Won't remember myself talking. Goddamn vegetable. That's what I am.

Okay, wait, pay attention. Think...Where is that from?

Like I should know?

Touch it...Looks like, fingernails?

shoot. Becky, did you get yourself into a fight again?

Should you ask yourself that question?

No, no I shouldn't. Last thing I remembered was...

That lovely daughter of yours bleeding all over the floor?

Shut up...Yes, yes that is, isn't it? fracking vegetable, that's what I am...

Pay attention. Enough. One step at a time. How much time do you have?

Ten minutes.

Crap, we gotta move...

Where? Where do we move?

I don't know just away from--

shoot.

How the hell did that lady get on the floor?

Well, from the looks of it, you did that, Becky.

No. No, of course not.

Then where did those scratches come from?

....Dammit. What do I do?

I don't know. She looks damn dead to me. Look at all that blood--

Oh god, there's too much of it.

Hide her. Have to hide the body. Have to hide the bod--

How much time to we have left?

Six minutes.

...And then you wake up again?

Yeah. And start all over again.

Quick, check her pockets, check anything...check your goddamn pockets.

Checking...Alicia Stone. Does the name ring a bell?

Don't be a smart @$$. Write this down. Take the sticky...good, write, write quickly, we don't have time. A-L-I-C-I-A Stone, like the thickness of your head, just kidding, just kidding.

Stick it on her, fast.

Where do I put her?

Like I would know? Away from here.

Okay, okay...the closet. That's the perfect spot, the closet. Hurry up.

God, she's heavy.

Well, she doesn't look fat.

She's still fracking heavy.

In the closet...In the closet we go, woo...

Oh god, you're fading. What time is it?

Too late........
~~
Alicia Stone. Do you know who she is?

I just woke up.

Well what were you doing?

Dragging her body, apparently.

Hey...What are those scratches from?

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Orlando_Hamar on June 29, 2006, 3:44:41 AM

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Orlando_HamarThis would be good if it was a bit more...coherent. You seem to have a conversation set, but nothing in the way of it. In other words, no speech marks...
I got confused. I assume this is a sequal to the Vampire one? She's in a daze?