My Brother--Chapter One

Chapter 1 - my brother
Submitted: April 16, 2007 • Updated: April 16, 2007
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Chapter 2 - my brother
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
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Chapter 3 - my brother
Submitted: April 17, 2007 • Updated: April 17, 2007
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animefanatic on April 27, 2007, 4:50:34 PM

animefanatic on April 27, 2007, 4:50:34 PM (Chapter: 1)

this is so emotional. it's deep and heartbreaking. i hope ur feeling better.

KAKASHI51 on April 26, 2007, 9:32:21 AM

KAKASHI51 on April 26, 2007, 9:32:21 AM (Chapter: 1)

awsome

trueleegoinginsane on April 20, 2007, 10:49:03 AM

trueleegoinginsane on April 20, 2007, 10:49:03 AM (Chapter: 1)

sped moment

frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 9:15:30 AM

frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 9:15:30 AM (Chapter: 1)

allison has her own account. hello its not mine

xtentenx on April 19, 2007, 1:44:04 PM

xtentenx on April 19, 2007, 1:44:04 PM (Chapter: 1)

that is a really awsome poem... it almost made me cry...
sorry about what happened..
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frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 7:11:05 AM

frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 7:11:05 AM (Chapter: 3)

aw

frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 7:10:15 AM

frozen-tundra on April 18, 2007, 7:10:15 AM (Chapter: 2)

So good *starts to cry* hehe

ManiacalGenius on April 17, 2007, 11:14:39 AM

ManiacalGenius on April 17, 2007, 11:14:39 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow. This an amazing and very sad poem. It it just so heartbreaking, and so emotional. I wish you well.

firegem on April 17, 2007, 6:41:06 AM

firegem on April 17, 2007, 6:41:06 AM (Chapter: 1)

That is so sad!! I wanna cry!!

ChibiChan15 on April 17, 2007, 5:56:45 AM

ChibiChan15 on April 17, 2007, 5:56:45 AM (Chapter: 1)

thats reely good...but sad T_____T i'm srry to hear bout ur bro. T_T

trueleegoinginsane on April 17, 2007, 5:17:09 AM

trueleegoinginsane on April 17, 2007, 5:17:09 AM (Chapter: index)

thankz everyone.. if yer wondering he got hit by a car, while he was riding bike. i have more chapters coming soon if you want to read em! and also more poems :)

tinystarkitten on April 16, 2007, 2:02:49 PM

tinystarkitten on April 16, 2007, 2:02:49 PM (Chapter: 1)

Wow. That's deep man. But that is a good poem. I know because I just had to go through a whole bunch of crappy poems to put into this book for school... Anyway, I digress. This is a very well-written poem. Gives the reader an idea into your feelings and sorrow. Great Job. He'd be honored.

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:23 AM

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:23 AM (Chapter: 1)

That is very well done. You convey your emotion very well. I wish you and your family the best.

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:43 AM

HimuraKamatari on April 16, 2007, 11:58:43 AM (Chapter: 1)

*favs*

DarkRedEye on April 16, 2007, 11:34:50 AM

DarkRedEye on April 16, 2007, 11:34:50 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow thats very good, especially the emotion and meaning behind it,tugs at my heart strings.

fullnarutoZ on April 16, 2007, 11:08:10 AM

fullnarutoZ on April 16, 2007, 11:08:10 AM (Chapter: 1)

omg thts sad how'd your bro die? (srry if thts too personal)

frozen-tundra on April 16, 2007, 10:57:08 AM

frozen-tundra on April 16, 2007, 10:57:08 AM (Chapter: index)

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! allie it is good and I will recomend u to everyone i talk to

trueleegoinginsane on April 16, 2007, 6:56:58 AM

trueleegoinginsane on April 16, 2007, 6:56:58 AM (Chapter: index)

HEYYYYY PEOPLE... COMMENT ...PLEEEEEEAAASE!