Chapter 1 - Not dead, Not Alive
Submitted May 2, 2004 Updated May 2, 2004 Status Incomplete | OH I LOVE THIS POEM
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Chapter 1 - Not dead, Not Alive
Chapter 1 - Not dead, Not Alive
Falling into an oblivion
Swallowed up by darkness
No one there to help me
I'm not dead
I'm not alive
In silent rage
All i see is red
My blood tears running down
Staining my pale skin
I'm not dead
I'm not alive
YAY I love this poem SO MUCH. I hope u like it 2! Please leave a comment!
Swallowed up by darkness
No one there to help me
I'm not dead
I'm not alive
In silent rage
All i see is red
My blood tears running down
Staining my pale skin
I'm not dead
I'm not alive
YAY I love this poem SO MUCH. I hope u like it 2! Please leave a comment!
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crazy_jamaican_gurl on June 28, 2006, 11:38:59 AM
love...it!kagome325 on December 30, 2005, 12:05:34 AM
kagome325 on
that kinda reminds me of a fate i made up that is worse then death called a broken spirit if you get your spirit broken you wander a black relm in pain all alone for the rest of eternity you cannot be revived or reincarnated either you just dont exist
anyways nice poem ilike (gives you a cookie:)
Kinlyu on May 4, 2005, 6:45:24 AM
Kinlyu on
w00t? no paragraphs? this means I will be posting poetry as an image if that's possible. If I'd want to.Nice ^^
Como on May 1, 2005, 2:57:20 AM
Como on
lol yeah yeah you rock we all know it dont we?ShadowOfDarkness on January 22, 2005, 9:11:52 PM
This is why you are on my faves list. You are one hell of a poet! Keep it up! you are my FAVE poet.~ShadowOfDarkness~
sakura_sohma on January 4, 2005, 2:43:03 AM
sakura_sohma on
you now what i dont get? why FAC cant let you do paragraphs!!! /*cry* love this though! (i know ive already commented but hey) (o yeah im pained immortal)pained_immortal on August 5, 2004, 6:57:26 AM
i can so see him singing that!!!you are a good'en unloved!
silver_dreams on June 12, 2004, 12:45:33 PM
not bad, you have talent, you just need to work on it a little.