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Not Dead, Not Alive




Chapter 1 - Not dead, Not Alive
Submitted: May 2, 2004 • Updated: May 2, 2004
Word count: 64 • Size: <1k • Comments: 10 • views: 220


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crazy_jamaican_gurl on June 28, 2006, 11:38:59 AM

crazy_jamaican_gurl on (Chapter: 1)!

kagome325 on December 30, 2005, 12:05:34 AM

kagome325 on (Chapter: 1)
kagome325that kinda reminds me of a fate i made up that is worse then death called a broken spirit

if you get your spirit broken you wander a black relm in pain all alone for the rest of eternity you cannot be revived or reincarnated either you just dont exist

anyways nice poem ilike (gives you a cookie:)

Kinlyu on May 4, 2005, 6:45:24 AM

Kinlyu on (Chapter: 1)
Kinlyuw00t? no paragraphs? this means I will be posting poetry as an image if that's possible. If I'd want to.

Nice ^^

Como on May 1, 2005, 2:57:20 AM

Como on (Chapter: 1)
Comolol yeah yeah you rock we all know it dont we?

ShadowOfDarkness on January 22, 2005, 9:11:52 PM

ShadowOfDarkness on (Chapter: 1)
ShadowOfDarknessThis is why you are on my faves list. You are one hell of a poet! Keep it up! you are my FAVE poet.

sakura_sohma on January 4, 2005, 2:43:03 AM

sakura_sohma on (Chapter: 1)
sakura_sohmayou now what i dont get? why FAC cant let you do paragraphs!!! /*cry* love this though! (i know ive already commented but hey) (o yeah im pained immortal)

pained_immortal on August 5, 2004, 6:57:26 AM

pained_immortal on (Chapter: 1)
pained_immortali can so see him singing that!!!

you are a good'en unloved!

silver_dreams on June 12, 2004, 12:45:33 PM

silver_dreams on (Chapter: 1)
silver_dreamsnot bad, you have talent, you just need to work on it a little.