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Broken Stars

A Kingdom Hearts fan fiction. By viicious. Yay.

Chapters

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Chapter I
Submitted: August 24, 2003 • Updated: August 24, 2003
Word count: 641 • Size: 3k • Comments: 5 • views: 254

Chapter 2 - Chapter II
Submitted: August 25, 2003 • Updated: August 25, 2003
Word count: 2675 • Size: 14k • Comments: 5 • views: 290

Comments

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darkness_consumed on February 14, 2006, 4:38:38 AM

darkness_consumed on (Chapter: 2)
darkness_consumedI like it. will you read my story Twilight Sea & Moonlit Mist?????

Caught-In-Twilight on May 6, 2005, 2:22:42 PM

Caught-In-Twilight on (Chapter: 1)
Caught-In-TwilightI like that you kept everyone in chacter and this is a great story!

Enjeru on August 31, 2004, 2:12:16 PM

Enjeru on (Chapter: 1)
EnjeruAll I can say is (sorry sock_eater).........MEEP! That is an awesome story. I like the way you make Kairi sound. Also, you can really tell all the emotions that Sora is feeling. He is feeling, in my opnion, torn between teo friends! Oh ya! Before I forget... *Gives viicious a Muffin* Enjoy, and off I go to Chapter II! AWAY!!!

kristefur on April 20, 2004, 9:21:44 AM

kristefur on (Chapter: 2)
kristefurAren't you gonna keep going? pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease?

kristefur on April 20, 2004, 9:21:36 AM

kristefur on (Chapter: 2)
kristefurAren't you gonna keep going? pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease?

FantasyChick1418 on January 19, 2004, 1:25:16 PM

FantasyChick1418 on (Chapter: 2)
FantasyChick1418This story is awesome i love it. Serously that is a great story.

Soa: PERFECTION.

Kairi: Hello i am the one giving the Reveiw get out of here.Sora: Hey i thought you liked me
Kairi: I do like you
Sora: Then let me stay about me
Kairi: No, like i was saying I lvoe your...
Sora: Please
Kairi: No
Sora: Fine then i will never talk to you again
*Fan girl looks at Sora and grins evily*
Kairi: My boy!
*grabs Sora and runs away*

Be-bye

Kairi_______
I dunno i'm married to Sora

kristefur on January 6, 2004, 11:54:08 PM

kristefur on (Chapter: 1)
kristefurI love it you think you could make a chapter about, like Kairi and Sora are really together? Well other than Kairi being clumsy, I've never heard a better story in my life! Great job!!!!!

KitsuneHino on November 29, 2003, 10:28:37 PM

KitsuneHino on (Chapter: 1)
KitsuneHino*cheers Riku on* Knock em dead, cutie! Uh...I mean...I liked this fic! And Kairi's a ditz! *waves anti-kairi flags*

TheLastOtaku on November 15, 2003, 6:11:12 AM

TheLastOtaku on (Chapter: 2)
TheLastOtakuawesome awesome!!! I love it u gots ta continue ^_^

Nami on October 23, 2003, 10:07:40 PM

Nami on (Chapter: 1)
NamiI like it!! *adds to faves* And I love how you kept them in character instead of acting all crazy and crap!