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Chapter 4 - penny!

Ye could not think of a good title. Anyway the story is about Luiza (c) Atemulover and Ayame (c) me ^_^ They are best friends but there parents are enemies. (well the dads are lol) Bla bla bla I'm bored just read it!

Chapter 4 - penny!

Chapter 4 - penny!
“Hey mum I’m going to go play with Kek for a while ok?” Ayame said to her mother. “OK” “Yay” Ayame ran down to the oasis because she was already late. When she got there Luiza and Kek where sitting on the sand next to each other looking at the small lake that lead to the Nile. “Luiza!” Ayame yelled. Luiza got up and ran to Ayame, they both hugged each other laughing and crying. “It’s been ages since I saw you” Ayame said. “My dad has been keeping me in just in case I had to jump out my window” Luiza said.  “Hi Ayame” Kek said. “Hi” “Do you come meet here every week then?” “Yeah, sort of I guess” “That was funny when you Dad and mine were using them words” Luiza said. “Yeah, they didn’t say it right you don’t say beep like beep you say beeeeeep” “Hehe” Luiza, Ayame and Kek played in the oasis for a while. “I want to get something to eat on the way home but I need a penny, do you two have one?” Kek said. “No” Ayame said. “Nope sorry” Luiza said.  Luiza and Ayame played sandcastles while Kek crawled around the sand looking for a penny. He was about to give up with he saw a bronze circle. “What is it Kek?” Ayame said. “IT’S A PENNY!” Kek yelled. “Good for you” Ayame said. Kek dusted it but it wasn’t a penny it was a very rusty 5p. “WTF!” Kek yelled throwing the coin away. “I think I have a penny” Luiza said, she looked in her pocket and brought out a shiny penny. “Gimme that beeping penny!” “OK OK”  “What’s going on?” A voice said. “Oh no it’s one of the palace guards” Luiza said. “Luiza duck under the lake” “OK” Luiza ran and jumped into the lake. “What are you two kids screaming about?” The guard yelled. “Nothing” Kek said. “You were screaming about pennies!” “So we was playing the penny game” “And that is?” “Where you got to keep yelling penny and if you don’t you get hit by one” Ayame said “Stupid game, for stupid children” The guard muttered and walked off. When he was gone Luiza jumped up gasping for breath. “You OK?” Ayame said. “I’ll live” “The sun is setting we all better go home now” “Yeah, I’ll see you both next week” Ayame said. They all went the different ways home. That’s for this I got bored so I added the penny thing ¬_¬

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AtemuLover on September 16, 2006, 6:51:50 PM

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AtemuLovergreat story it's so funny^^, oh and i've uploaded the 3th chapter of my fanfiction now^^

Bean on September 16, 2006, 10:12:14 AM

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Beanhahaha! thats so great! "GIMME THAT <beep>ing PENNY!"

haha...my Kek....will you ever put me and Marik in here!? plz!!!!

lol its great so far! dont stop!

xxbeanxx