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Chapter 1 - Love

Just a poem i wrote for someone very special....i hope you all like it

Chapter 1 - Love

Chapter 1 - Love
I sit in my bedroom and try to sleep,
Thinking of you is keeping me awake.
With all these feelings that I have,
I wanted to tell them to you today.

With your beautiful smile,
In this image i cannot see.
The only thought I have,
Will our dreams ever be?

This love that we both have,
It makes no sense.
But it is entirely true,
Our love is really intense.

We both don't understand,
With this extremely new feeling.
But it is kinda funny,
We both find it appealing.

But to me I love this new emotion,
And it is just so new.
But to me this new feeling,
I'm really glad that it's with you.

I Love You

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HimuraKamatari on February 10, 2007, 7:19:08 AM

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HimuraKamatariI love it!!!!! Thank you. ^////^
*favs* ^^

TydleTheHedgehog on December 27, 2006, 1:42:41 PM

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TydleTheHedgehogHow sweet!I wish my poems were more like yours!(which by the way is on my story list too!=D)Nice poem!Very nice!^-^

Would you like commenting on mine?

ShadowsGirl101 on December 27, 2006, 1:00:38 PM

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ShadowsGirl101When you write this?Oohhohoho....Somebody.....