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Chapter 3 - Who took Cheese? (The crew meets Jak Co!)

WHO SHOVED THE 'thing' DOWN SHADOW'S THROAT? WHAT IS THE 'thing'? WHO IS THE SHOVER??? This is like a mystery/comedy story! Theres like clues on each chapter, some are easy to spot and some are hard!!! HAPPY CRIME SOLVING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Chapter 3 - Who took Cheese? (The crew meets Jak Co!)

Chapter 3 - Who took Cheese? (The crew meets Jak Co!)


What is it?

Chapter Three

Who took Cheese?

(Subtitle: The crew meets Jak and Co!)



(Everyone): CHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE!!! WHERE AAAAAAARE YOOOUUU???

(Blaze): I think I know where Cheese is!!!
(Everyone): WHERE??????

(Blaze): *points at Charmy's room*
(Everyone): *GASPS* *inhaled some dots* *coughcoughcough*

(Charmy): Cheese? IN MY ROOM??? Wait, he couldn't be!

(Everyone): *looks at Charmy's room but doesn't see anything*

(Charmy): I told you! -.-

(Everyone): *goes outside to look for Cheese*

(???): *goes back inside* I DIDN'T TAKE CHEESE! PROMISE!!! EVEN IF BOYS DO LIE A LOT I SWEAR I DIDN'T TAKE THAT BEAST!!!

(??? 2): *pokes ???*

(???): HEY WATCH IT!!!

(??? 3): Where are we??

(???): YOU'RE IN MIXED'S STORY ABOUT SONIC CHARACTERS NOT OVERGROWN ELVES AND A DISGUSTING RAT!

(??? 3): HEY! Im NOT a rat but an OTSELL! And, I have a NAME! IT'S DAXTER!!!
(??? 2): And Im Jak. Meet the..

(Jak Crew): THE JAK CO!!!!!!! (Jak and Co © Naughty Dog Inc.)

~*~EVERYONE IS SILENT~*~

(???): Well, we don't know you! And, what are you doing here?

(Keira): SHE placed us here! *points at Mixed*
(Mixed): Uhh…*throws Dots at them and runs away*
(??? And Jak Co): OWWWW!!!!

(Pecker): So! You are this, `Mysterious Shover', ain't I right? Well, it's not right for a little guy to be committing such a DANGEROUS crime!

(???): AWWWW GREAT! You just gave the readers another obvious clue!!!!
~*~FORGET THAT PECKER EVER SAID THAT~*~

(Sonic Co): *comes back* we can't find Chee-OMFG WHO ARE YOUS???!?!?!?!?#r%#rsefsgd

~*~Cricket: Chirp…~*~

(Jak): Im Jak, He's Daxter, He's Samos, She's Keira, She's Onin, He's Pecker, She's Ashlein, He's Torn and He's Sig.

(Sonic Co): …

(Random Person): *cough*

(Everyone): SHUT UP!!!
(Random Person): …*Throws Dots at everyone and Runs away*

(Everyone): OWWWWW!!!

(Daxter): DON'T do that again, Random Person!! Jak gets all mad and scary if you PISS him off! So DON'T piss him off!!!

(Sonic Co): …*Pokes Jak*

(Jak): *turns to Dark Jak* RAWR!!!!

(Sonic Co): O.O??????

(Dark Jak): RAWR!!! >:)

(Sonic Co): O.O?!?!?!!?!?!?!?

(Dark Jak): I SAID RAWR DAM IT GET SCARED ALREADY!!!!

(Sonic Co): …

(Dark Jak): These guys are INSANE they didn't get scared of me…

(Knuckles): Dude, believe me, we've seen worse.

(Jak Co): O.O????

(Knuckles): Like, um….

(Jak Co): O.O?!?!?!?!?!

(Knuckles): …

(Jak Co): O.O?!?!?!?!?#?@#grhyryy^#w%#fd

(Knuckles): =D

(Jak Co): …

(Sonic Co except Knuckles): …

(Knuckles): …*throws Dots at everyone and runs away*

(Everyone): AHHHHHHHHH OUCH!!!

(???): *tries to sneak out to find Cheese but can't*

(Jak and Co): So, who are you guys anyway?

(Sonic): *steps in* Well, I'm Sonic, He's Tails, He's Knuckles which ran away, He's Shadow…

(Shadow): ….!!!

(Onin): *does hand signs*

(Pecker): I'll translate that for you. Onin says, what is wrong with that HIDEOUS looking hedgehog! I added the HIDEOUS part!

(Shadow) -.-

(Rouge): Someone shoved a `thing' down Shadow's throat. Yet, we don't know who the Mysterious Shover is.

(Jak Co): WE DO!!!

(???): *hides behind some person*

(Sonic Co): WHO???

(Jak Co): We won't tell! :P

(Sonic Co): WHYY???

(Jak Co): *points at Mixed still running* Coz SHE says so!

(Sonic Co): MIXED! >:(

(Mixed): Uhh…*throws Dots at their mouths and grabs her car and drives off*

(Everyone): *cough cough*

(Sonic): *cough* Excuse her. Anyway, She's Rouge, He's Omega…

(Omega): Greetings! I have come back!

(Sonic): -.- Anyway, She's….AMY….

(Amy): *Gasps* U SAID MY NAME!!! *glomps Sonic*

(Sonic): NOOOoooooOOOOooooOOOOoooo

(Vector): ): I'LL continue the Job for you….She's Cream, He's Big, He's Vector, He's Blaze, He's … Charmy????

(Charmy): Uh, Yes?

(Vector): Never mind. And, of course, MEE!!! WORSHIP ME MY SLAVES!! BOW DOWN TO YOUR MASTER!!!
(Everyone except Vector): o.O??!??!!??!!?

(Vector): …*throws Dots at everyone and runs away but trips on a dot and cries out for help but no help comes so he dies and goes to heaven but goes back to hell but hell and heaven doesn't want Vector so his soul floats away while Vector's body got rotten and was eaten by maggots but 2 birds came and ate the maggots and ate Shadow's flesh but they both want the eyes so they tried to pull the eyes but then blood came out and the 2 birds died and the birds and Vector all turned to bones and was blew by the wind in some unknown destination*

(Everyone): …….?!?!?!?!??!?!
(Amy): What did he say again???

(Everyone): HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA!!! AHAHA!! HAHAHAHHAHAH!!!! HAAHAH…hahaha…haha….ha…haha…ha…ha..Haha…hahaha…We don't know.

(Amy): …

(Cheese): CHAO!!!

(Sonic Co): CHEESE!!!
(Jak Co): AHH! WHAT IS THAT!!
(Cheese): *takes out a gun* CHAO!!! >:)

(Sonic Co): AHH!! WHAT IS THAT!!!

(Jak Co): Oh, it's a bird.



(A.N Sorry about this Chapter's Delay. Anyway, if you don't know anything about the Jak Crew go to the Games section of FAC, find Jak (And Daxter) Trilogy, and you can see all of the Characters there and what they look like. Anyways, I gave out 2 hidden clues here, or three. Plus, the Jak Co knows who the ??? Person is, but I won't let them tell the Sonic Co, coz I don't want them to. :P and, Mixed is ME! o^ ^o Anyways, ONWARD WITH THE CLUES!



Clue # 1: It's not Shade.

Clue # 2: This ??? Person is NOT a hedgehog.

Clue # 3: ??? Is a flight character.)

























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NightsandRealafan on February 23, 2011, 8:14:37 AM

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NightsandRealafanIT. MUST. BE....*trips on a dot and dies but then revives but the ??? person shoves a thing down MY throat and i cant tell you who it is* -_-'

xxmixed_musicxx on April 22, 2006, 3:56:36 PM

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xxmixed_musicxxYou know this part:

(Vector): …*throws Dots at everyone and runs away but trips on a dot and cries out for help but no help comes so he dies and goes to heaven but goes back to hell but hell and heaven doesn't want Vector so his soul floats away while Vector's body got rotten and was eaten by maggots but 2 birds came and ate the maggots and ate Shadow's flesh but they both want the eyes so they tried to pull the eyes but then blood came out and the 2 birds died and the birds and Vector all turned to bones and was blew by the wind in some unknown destination*

~*~*~
This little part:

but 2 birds came and ate the
maggots and ate Shadow's flesh

~*~ It was ment to be Vector's flesh but I was thinking of Shadow so I accidentally placed it there, and I can't be bothered to fix it, so bear with meh :P~*~

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on April 25, 2009, 5:27:45 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4Ever on April 20, 2009, 6:51:04 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4EverNVM

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on April 20, 2009, 6:50:02 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4EverNO IT'S CHEESE!

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on April 20, 2009, 5:02:02 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4Ever(Vector): …*throws Dots at everyone and runs away but trips on a dot and cries out for help but no help comes so he dies and goes to heaven but goes back to hell but hell and heaven doesn't want Vector so his soul floats away while Vector's body got rotten and was eaten by maggots but 2 birds came and ate the maggots and ate Shadow's flesh but they both want the eyes so they tried to pull the eyes but then blood came out and the 2 birds died and the birds and Vector all turned to bones and was blew by the wind in some unknown destination*

I bursted out laughing at that part it was so funny!

ShadowAndMaria4Ever on April 20, 2009, 5:00:46 AM

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ShadowAndMaria4EverWell, I think it's Tails or Charmy. I found a really obvious clue that NO ONE probably found so HAH HAH!!!

DragonGirl1136 on December 24, 2006, 12:15:09 AM

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DragonGirl1136This is one of the most random things I've ever read... AND I LIKE IT! WHEEEEE! Hmmmmm.... the shover is ROUGE!

DragonGirl1136 on December 24, 2006, 12:15:36 AM

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DragonGirl1136Please tell me on my profile if I'm right.

sonamy4evaevaeva on November 20, 2006, 6:19:41 AM

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sonamy4evaevaevacream or cheese!

darkness42 on April 24, 2006, 9:14:51 AM

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darkness42finally!! new chap!! LOVE IT!!

Shade- where did i go? (looks for self) i can't find ME?!?! WHERE AM I!!! (yells)

shut up.

Shade- (looks under bed)

luv_ty_like_sly on April 24, 2006, 7:17:23 AM

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luv_ty_like_slyOMG O.O I think I got it!!!!
Shadow:...
Onin:*does hand signs*
Pecker:Shr said that he said that you haven't got it.
Me:How do YOU know what she said he said?!
Pecker:....
Onin:...
Shadow:She's nuts!!I mean....!!
Everyone:0.o!!!!