The Final Deception Of Organization XIII

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Malexos
Malexos

Submitted
June 17, 2006
Updated
June 17, 2006
Status
Incomplete

Chapters: 1
Size: 2k
Words: 413
Comments: 1
Views: 284
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Rating: 0

When the time comes . . .
Will you know the way?

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Category: Games » - by Publisher » Square-Enix » Kingdom Hearts series » Chain of Memories, Kingdom Hearts II

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Chapters

Chapter 1 - Prologue: Luxan
Submitted: June 17, 2006 • Updated: June 17, 2006
Word count: 413 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 88

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Srinidhi on June 23, 2006, 10:15:56 PM

Srinidhi on June 23, 2006, 10:15:56 PM (Chapter: 1)

Sounds familiar.Very cold and harsh it seemeth I say.On Luxan that is.And now he has morphed into just that?Story hangs a bit though.Maybe you do need help?Names sound awee bit odd...they hang around asnd don't sound too much like names.Tweak them a bit.Edit this extract...see where you're taking it.I suppose its because this is but the introductory bit.Not bad though.Too much mystery.....what does thwe organisation do?

Oh and by the way thanks for the comment....the other blessed losers don't even pause to look around and do that.Thats what led me to spamming the section....I thought the dates meant the day of posting.So its like some them had the same date as my post AND THEY HAD 31 COMMENTS!That got my blood boiling and I did what I did