Star Trek: DS9 *(Co-op fic with YunieXTidus)
Submitted April 18, 2011 Updated June 8, 2011 Status Incomplete | Takes place during the early seasons of DS9. Trekkies, unite and comment!
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - Baptism by Fire
Submitted: April 18, 2011 • Updated: June 8, 2011
Word count: 5459 • Size: 29k • Comments: 4 • views: 96
Chapter 2 - "Carpe Diem" (Part 1)
Submitted: May 22, 2011 • Updated: May 22, 2011
Word count: 3572 • Size: 19k • Comments: 3 • views: 113
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alchemest1 on September 26, 2011, 10:25:01 AM
alchemest1 on (Chapter: 2)
Very nice mate. A few grammar and spelling errors, but very good as always. Looking forward to more.nextguardian on September 26, 2011, 2:13:53 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 2)
Yeah, I've got to fix those. This was one of my first attempts at using Windows Speech Recognition. That's where all the errors came from.alchemest1 on September 26, 2011, 9:57:07 AM
alchemest1 on (Chapter: 1)
Nice work Mate. As always i love reading your stories. Your writing style is similar to what I am used to, but I can see some different attempts at new angles. Good work.andr28a on June 15, 2011, 10:11:42 AM
andr28a on (Chapter: 1)
Finally got to read this.Yes this has a very good star trek feel to it and action right at the get go to boot. Nice one
YunieXTidus on May 22, 2011, 4:52:32 PM
YunieXTidus on (Chapter: 2)
Sooo good! I love all the interactions bouncing around. Poor daniel, messing it up with Odo. What happens next?!YunieXTidus on April 18, 2011, 3:53:03 PM
YunieXTidus on (Chapter: 1)
Fabulous, my friend! Although I do suggest letting me beta your submissions, for minor spelling errors... like this one. xD“Are internal sensors functioning?!” Dugan demanded. He knew his crew had been frazzled by the external attacks and the internal sabotage both, but he expected them to push that aside as he had.
“No sir, we’re working blind!”
Stifling a curse, do gun headed to engineering.
Do gun. xD I'm cracking up re-typing it, but I seriously think I cracked a rib when I read that. xDDDD
But very well-done! I think I'm going to enjoy this co-op.
nextguardian on April 18, 2011, 5:30:34 PM
nextguardian on (Chapter: 1)
Ahh, damn it! This is what comes of trying to use speech recognition software instead of good, old-fashioned typing! Gah! I'm going to correct that in the original text. That's too stupid of me. -_-'