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Username Baratacom Gender Male
Date Joined Location Right here
Last Updated Occupation Seeking for my Best Place *shine*
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One day I was born...and since then my mental age is still the same....


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MoonWalker82958 on June 22, 2006, 12:55:37 PM

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MoonWalker82958Jenny was so happy about the house they had found. For once in her life 'twas on the right side of town. She unpacked her things with such great ease. As she watched her new curtains blow in the breeze. How wonderful it was to have her own room. School would be starting; she'd have friends over soon. There'd be sleep-overs, and parties; she was so happy It's just the way she wanted her life to be. On the first day of school, everything went great. She made new friends and even got a date! She thought, "I want to be popular and I'm going to be, Because I just got a date with the star of the team!" To be known in this school you had to have clout, And dating this guy would sure help her out. There was only one problem stopping her fate. Her parents had said she was too young to date. "Well I just won't tell them the entire truth. They won't know the difference; what's there to lose?" Jenny asked to stay with her friends that night. Her parents frowned but said, "All right." Excited, she got ready for the big event But as she rushed around like she had no sense, She began to feel guilty about all the lies, But what's a pizza, a party, and a moonlight ride? Well the pizza was good, and the party was great, But the moonlight ride would have to wait. For Dan was half drunk by this time. But he kissed her and said that he was just fine. Then the room filled with smoked and Dan took a puff. Jenny couldn't believe he was smoking that stuff. Now Dan was ready to ride to the point But only after he'd smoked another joint. They jumped in the car for the moonlight ride, Not thinking that he was too drunk to drive. They finally made it to the point at last, And Dan started trying to make a pass. A pass is not what Jenny wanted at all (and by a pass, I don't mean playing football.) "Perhaps my parents were right....maybe I am too young. Boy, how could I ever, ever be so dumb." With all of her might, she pushed Dan away: "Please take me home, I don't want to stay." Dan cranked up the engine and floored the gas. In a matter of seconds they were going too fast. As Dan drove on in a fit of wild anger, Jenny knew that her life was in danger. She begged and pleaded for him to slow down, But he just got faster as they neared the town. "Just let me get home! I'll confess that I lied. I really went out for a moonlight ride." Then all of a sudden, she saw a big flash. "Oh God, Please help us! We're going to crash!" She doesn't remember the force of impact. Just that everything all of a sudden went black. She felt someone remove her from the twisted rubble, And heard, "call an ambulance! These kids are in trouble! Voices she heard...a few words at best. But she knew there were two cars involved in the wreck. Then wondered to herself if Dan was all right, And if the people in the other car was alive. She awoke in the hospital to faces so sad. "You've been in a wreck and it looks pretty bad." These voices echoed inside her head, As they gently told her that Dan was dead. They said "Jenny, we've done all we can do. But it looks as if we'll lose you too." "But the people in the other car!?" Jenny cried. "We're sorry, Jenny, they also died." Jenny prayed, "God, forgive me for what I've done I only wanted to have just one night of fun." "Tell those people's family, I've made their lives dim, And wish I could return their families to them." "Tell Mom and Dad I'm sorry I lied, And that it's my fault so many have died. Oh, nurse, won't you please tell them that for me?" The nurse just stood there-she never agreed. But took Jenny's hand with tears in her eyes. And a few moments later Jenny died. A man asked the nurse, "Why didn't you do your best To bid that girl her one last request?" She looked at the man with eyes so sad. "Because the people in the other car were her mom and dad." This story is sad and unpleasant but true, So young people take heed, it could have been you.


Please listen to this angel's request......

If you do the small favor she asks to come true, She will be sent down to guard and protect you. it for Jenny.

Send ten copies and see what happens in four days. You will get a surprise. This is true, even if you are not superstitious.

Good luck, but please remember: 10 copies of this message must leave your hands in 24 hours.................................

I_Totally_Rock on July 12, 2005, 12:12:50 PM

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I_Totally_RockIf you're wondering about the G/PG rating and stuff. Here's how it goes.
G: General, all ages can see.(little kid stuff.)
PG: Parental Guidence. More suitable for like 7 or 8-year-olds AT LEAST.Like only ONE swear word in it.(pic wise)PLUS, no innapropriate stuff.
PG13: Parental Guidance 13. Most think it's not suitable for kids under 13.( Gay, Lesbo, sexual themes, etc. semi-innapropriate stuff.)
R: Restricted. Basically for like teens older than 13.(Major nudity, gay, lesbo, etc. innapropriate stuff.))
NC-17: Don't really know what it means, but it's for people older than 17.( People doing sex, BIG violence, you know, REALLY innappropriate stuff.)
Anyway, that's all I know. Check out the rating system for a better look.
~Kathie ^_^~

Cara on February 4, 2005, 11:55:55 AM

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CaraHi. It's me I wanted to say hi and ask how you're doing? I'm saying hi to all my friends, also I didn't know if you knew this site ( but it has some funny/interesting videos. Here are a few links to ones I like I hope you like them. ^^

Rein_Chan on February 2, 2005, 12:14:39 PM

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Rein_ChanHey. ^_^ Just wanted to say you're a great artist. You also sound a little like my sis Cara. *points to above comments* Thats her, she's how I saw your work.

Cara on February 2, 2005, 11:18:00 AM

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CaraP.S. I like your profile and the pic up there. It's cool and I don't know why but for some reason you sound like Ryu from Shaman King to me. Maybe cause I've been on a Shaman King kick and maybe cause he's one of my fav characters on that show. The other ones Manta.

Cara on February 2, 2005, 5:08:51 AM

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CaraHi I wanted to tell you I think you're an awesome artist, you're in my favs, and I hope to see more of your work. Also I did look at all you pics but I was afraid I would over load/kill your e-mail and if the doughnut thing gets annoying just let me know and I'll stop.^^

Hearsegurl on July 15, 2004, 7:37:07 PM

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HearsegurlMotorcycles kick @$$!!!!!!!! COOL PIX too! ^_^

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