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The Truth

Proverbs of a Prophet, that the wisdom of children should be increased.

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Chapter 1 - The Truth
Submitted: February 8, 2006 • Updated: February 8, 2006
Word count: 765 • Size: 4k • Comments: 2 • views: 241

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Trinity_Fire on February 26, 2006, 6:47:46 AM

Trinity_Fire on (Chapter: 1)
Trinity_FireLovely! I adore the images I get reading this, and the lovely words...
And how certain words are capitalized, it gives it a kind of... feeling...
It's so hard to find the words to describe your work! It's so good! XD
Amazing. :)

shoujoneko on February 18, 2006, 9:26:19 PM

shoujoneko on (Chapter: 1)
shoujonekoWoah! It's such an impressive poem! It uses words I haven't even heard of to, =-.-;=
Anyways, it definatly has a strong religious feel to it with all the Old English and all. I'm not a strongly religious person but theology has always intrested me. I love the way you write your poems! Your punctuation and spellings great to! (I'm a bit of a perfectionst, I think it's a Virgo thing, lol).
*adds to faves*