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Chapter 1 - Fallen

This is a tribute to John Miltons book: Paradise Lost, and written to the tune of Black Sabbath's N.I.B.

-Ansem

Chapter 1 - Fallen

Chapter 1 - Fallen
Fallen

Cast out of the heavens, damned to freefall

For once in that kingdom i stood tall.

Picking up speed, flesh burning off my back

Flung out from paradise, no going back.

Questioned the master on how he ruled

Furious was I when called the fool.

Cursing at him, enraged where I stand

Vowed to cause anarchy throughout his land.

Calling upon my comrades to and fro

To declare war upon my new foe.

As we fought on we knew no fear

Suddenly I realized that my time was near.

Wrapped in chains, flung from the sky

Only left to wonder if I would truly die.

Breakin through the earth, into where darkness dwells

Only to fall in a sea of fire, my anguish it swells.

Burning eternal, I reach the end of my tale

Standing before you, the grand architect of Hell.

Kneeling before me, see who I am

My name is Lucifer please take my hand.

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Sasukegurl on June 19, 2007, 12:20:21 PM

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SasukegurlThis is amazing! i love it...i cant wait until your next poem

AnsemtheDefiler666 on June 20, 2007, 5:01:10 AM

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AnsemtheDefiler666Thanks for the comment, it means alot to me.

TheVampireScourge on June 19, 2007, 11:28:59 AM

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TheVampireScourgewow, I'm very impressed, very deep but not overly dramatic, brilliant structure too

Shedemomn on June 19, 2007, 11:22:09 AM

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Shedemomnwow ill loved tht!!! tell me wen u add more!!!

likestodraw on June 19, 2007, 10:27:46 AM

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likestodrawIt's preaty good. I think it's awesome. You did a preaty good job. You got some skill there. Keep it up.

CryptoTheCat on June 19, 2007, 10:25:57 AM

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CryptoTheCatWow thats great! I love it! <3

AnaMariecb on June 19, 2007, 10:22:28 AM

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AnaMariecbIt's amazing! =) I love the song and the poem is very creative! ^__^ I had my brother, a true Ozzy fan (as I am not), judge it as well and he loved it. =3

DemonessDarkFlame on June 19, 2007, 10:00:26 AM

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DemonessDarkFlamewell, this being the third time i've read it, YAY go bubba this is awesome!!! loves it and all tha tgood jazz.