Fallen (A Poem)

Chapter 1 - Fallen
Submitted: June 18, 2007 • Updated: June 18, 2007
Word count: 158 • Size: <1k • Comments: 8 • views: 173

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Sasukegurl on June 19, 2007, 12:20:21 PM

Sasukegurl on June 19, 2007, 12:20:21 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is amazing! i love it...i cant wait until your next poem

AnsemtheDefiler666 on June 20, 2007, 5:01:10 AM

AnsemtheDefiler666 on June 20, 2007, 5:01:10 AM (Chapter: 1)

Thanks for the comment, it means alot to me.

TheVampireScourge on June 19, 2007, 11:28:59 AM

TheVampireScourge on June 19, 2007, 11:28:59 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow, I'm very impressed, very deep but not overly dramatic, brilliant structure too

jackerah on June 19, 2007, 11:22:36 AM

jackerah on June 19, 2007, 11:22:36 AM (Chapter: index)

Nice job!! Nice jazz too!

Shedemomn on June 19, 2007, 11:22:09 AM

Shedemomn on June 19, 2007, 11:22:09 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow ill loved tht!!! tell me wen u add more!!!

Nekogal411 on June 19, 2007, 10:59:43 AM

Nekogal411 on June 19, 2007, 10:59:43 AM (Chapter: index)

^^ Very nice you are very talented!

likestodraw on June 19, 2007, 10:27:46 AM

likestodraw on June 19, 2007, 10:27:46 AM (Chapter: 1)

It's preaty good. I think it's awesome. You did a preaty good job. You got some skill there. Keep it up.

CryptoTheCat on June 19, 2007, 10:25:57 AM

CryptoTheCat on June 19, 2007, 10:25:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow thats great! I love it! <3

AnaMariecb on June 19, 2007, 10:22:28 AM

AnaMariecb on June 19, 2007, 10:22:28 AM (Chapter: 1)

It's amazing! =) I love the song and the poem is very creative! ^__^ I had my brother, a true Ozzy fan (as I am not), judge it as well and he loved it. =3

DemonessDarkFlame on June 19, 2007, 10:00:26 AM

DemonessDarkFlame on June 19, 2007, 10:00:26 AM (Chapter: 1)

well, this being the third time i've read it, YAY go bubba this is awesome!!! loves it and all tha tgood jazz.