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Chapter 1 - Regret

a poem i had to write for my creative writing class. the first stanza is from a chinese poem. um... i hate writing poetry... so i might put up some short stories i write for that class too, since they are more fun to write.

Chapter 1 - Regret

Chapter 1 - Regret




word gets away-

four fast horses

can't catch it.



these thoughts form

on my lips,

push forth

into the air.



hands grasp

at them

but like eels they

slither away.



expressions of

anger and

fear and

longing



tend to linger

in my mouth-

but sometimes

I lose my grip.



and upon their escape,

these words

run rampant

throughout town.



it's just another

slip of the tongue.

but sometimes slips

can be fatal.










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Ichidou_Daisuke on November 28, 2005, 3:41:59 AM

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Ichidou_DaisukeDude, awesome poem. ^^ I like your metaphores.

BAMFManiac on October 23, 2004, 11:04:42 AM

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BAMFManiacthanks guys! *hugs silver octagon* i love it!

BML on October 18, 2004, 1:11:09 PM

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BMLthis is cool. deep and what not. and yeah, sucks to write poetry. but this one turned really good so hold your head high.

*gives gold star* nah, jus joshin ya, its a silver octagon. muahahahaha.

DeathBo on October 10, 2004, 3:29:00 PM

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DeathBoi like it ;)

BAMFManiac on October 9, 2004, 7:45:00 AM

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BAMFManiacdamn the line breaks didn't show up. uhh there are four lines in each stanza