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a poem i had to write for my creative writing class. the first stanza is from a chinese poem. um... i hate writing poetry... so i might put up some short stories i write for that class too, since they are more fun to write.



Chapter 1 - Regret
Submitted: October 9, 2004 • Updated: October 9, 2004
Word count: 74 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 131


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Ichidou_Daisuke on November 28, 2005, 3:41:59 AM

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Ichidou_DaisukeDude, awesome poem. ^^ I like your metaphores.

BAMFManiac on October 23, 2004, 11:04:42 AM

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BAMFManiacthanks guys! *hugs silver octagon* i love it!

BML on October 18, 2004, 1:11:09 PM

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BMLthis is cool. deep and what not. and yeah, sucks to write poetry. but this one turned really good so hold your head high.

*gives gold star* nah, jus joshin ya, its a silver octagon. muahahahaha.

DeathBo on October 10, 2004, 3:29:00 PM

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DeathBoi like it ;)

BAMFManiac on October 9, 2004, 7:45:00 AM

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BAMFManiacdamn the line breaks didn't show up. uhh there are four lines in each stanza