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Dancing in the Demon's Dream

Kind of sad. Not really though. It doesn't really mean anything.



Chapter 1 - Dancing
Submitted: November 10, 2005 • Updated: November 10, 2005
Word count: 150 • Size: <1k • Comments: 3 • views: 176


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stippie on December 13, 2005, 4:09:28 AM

stippie on (Chapter: 1)
stippieOMG! you are good at poetry. *favs*

Bix on November 11, 2005, 11:49:47 AM

Bix on (Chapter: 1)
BixThanks! If you guys like this one, let me know and I'll post some more. I love poems! They're fun to write, but I write metaphorically. Sometimes you'll have to read between the lines. They all tell a story about something!

Shinigami-no-Kaze on November 11, 2005, 6:30:19 AM

Shinigami-no-Kaze on (Chapter: 1)
Shinigami-no-KazeThought I'd read some of your stuff--this caught my eye almost immediately because of a story of mine I'm writing with a friend. I really liked it. The rhyme scheme feels natural and unforced, and I like the lack of punctuation. A great poem. +fav