Chapter 1 - Broken Seal: Uzumaki Naruto
Submitted January 2, 2006 Updated January 3, 2006 Status Incomplete | These are little poems, most likely an offshoot from ShinobiWolf's Broken Song. If anyone reads this who knows ShinobiWolf, please tell him/her to read this. I'd like the critiscm so I can write better.
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Chapter 1 - Broken Seal: Uzumaki Naruto
Chapter 1 - Broken Seal: Uzumaki Naruto
Bleeding out
Through the seal
The demon's chakra
No time to let it heal
I've gotta get out
Of Konoha fast
Or all the people
Will come to remember what happened in the past
I feel the urge
The need to kill
I'm so bloodthirsty
I think I will
Kill everybody, out of desperation
Drink the blood as if it's juice
Never regret anything I did
I'll do it soon, no time to muse
Please run, all of you
Leave me behind
I won't remember what I did
'Cause Kyuubi's playin' with my mind.
Through the seal
The demon's chakra
No time to let it heal
I've gotta get out
Of Konoha fast
Or all the people
Will come to remember what happened in the past
I feel the urge
The need to kill
I'm so bloodthirsty
I think I will
Kill everybody, out of desperation
Drink the blood as if it's juice
Never regret anything I did
I'll do it soon, no time to muse
Please run, all of you
Leave me behind
I won't remember what I did
'Cause Kyuubi's playin' with my mind.
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Sesshys_Bitch on March 15, 2006, 1:15:23 PM
awwwww awesome and sad! ^^TailsNejiswife on February 8, 2006, 9:56:16 AM
thats really good!i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:33:19 AM
i_luv_kyo on
ooh...very nice. you have great talent in writing.
narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:21:52 AM
wow! this is a really good poem i can't wait to read da rest!