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Chapter 3 - Without Family or Friends - Inuzuka Kiba

These are little poems, most likely an offshoot from ShinobiWolf's Broken Song. If anyone reads this who knows ShinobiWolf, please tell him/her to read this. I'd like the critiscm so I can write better.

Chapter 3 - Without Family or Friends - Inuzuka Kiba

Chapter 3 - Without Family or Friends - Inuzuka Kiba
Without Family Or Friends - Inuzuka Kiba

Lost in the forest, the forest of Death
With no way to get back
I've got no way out and no way in
I've got absolutely no strength to attack
I might as well just lie down and die
I don't think anyone would care
My body moves without my control
My lifeless eyes will just stare and stare
I'm walking through a dark, dark tunnel
At the end there's a bright, bright light
Can I keep walking until I reach it?
Will I make it through this endless night?
Hopeless thoughts
Hopeful dreams
That still could never happen
Or so it seems
Alone in the forest, the Forest of Death
With family or friends
Why oh why did it have to be me?
During the Chuunin exam, my ill-fated life finally ends...

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TailsNejiswife on February 8, 2006, 10:01:11 AM

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TailsNejiswifeCOME ON KIBA U CAN MAKE IT!!!!!!!

Narufan on January 29, 2006, 11:55:25 AM

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NarufanKIBA!I AGREE WITH NARUTOGIRLNINJA!

i_luv_kyo on January 7, 2006, 3:38:39 AM

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i_luv_kyothis one has to be my favorite so far.

i love Kiba, but this one's is probably the best i've read.

narutogirlninja on January 7, 2006, 3:24:38 AM

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narutogirlninjaNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! MY LOVE! KIBA CAN'T DIE!