Chapter 1 - Mind V.S. Heart
Submitted May 1, 2005 Updated May 1, 2005 Status Incomplete | This is a poem about the battle of mind and heart. It's kind of hard to understand. But i hope you like it!
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Chapter 1 - Mind V.S. Heart
Chapter 1 - Mind V.S. Heart
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim
Or to sink.
Thrill me silly,
Set my hopes too high.
Then your not there,
Not even good-bye.
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Listen to love songs,
Make me miss.
Plan to see you soon,
Is it Horror or bliss?
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Picture your smile,
Feel your touch.
Do I hate or love you,
Too much.
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Going too fast,
But not too slow.
When you open up your arms,
Should I stay or shall I go?
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Not knowing to swim
Or to sink.
Thrill me silly,
Set my hopes too high.
Then your not there,
Not even good-bye.
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Listen to love songs,
Make me miss.
Plan to see you soon,
Is it Horror or bliss?
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Picture your smile,
Feel your touch.
Do I hate or love you,
Too much.
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
Going too fast,
But not too slow.
When you open up your arms,
Should I stay or shall I go?
Standing on the brink,
Not knowing to swim,
Or to sink.
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moonlitdemoness09 on November 11, 2005, 9:28:17 AM
this is awesome! twas very nice! and i agree with Liedetector16. it does kinda make it "swim or sink" but what you have is good. Liedetector16 on July 18, 2005, 1:02:30 PM
I like this one ALOT! The repitition really makes it, "swim or sink." I have to fav this one. *favs*higes_wolf on May 2, 2005, 12:11:55 PM
higes_wolf on
Wow!this is awsome stuff!i like ur storys/poems!*favs*~higes_wolf