It wasn't you...It wansn't me...*Love & Death Poem
Submitted November 11, 2005 Updated November 11, 2005 Status Incomplete | Sad...and bittersweet.
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Chapter 1 - Death
Submitted: November 11, 2005 • Updated: November 11, 2005
Word count: 1084 • Size: 4k • Comments: 27 • views: 294
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hidden_dept on May 4, 2006, 1:33:59 AM
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that was amazing! Very sad and well ryhmed go you! 8throws party in honour*FATE_The_Pirate on April 24, 2006, 8:58:57 AM
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wow that is a good poem... i luff it im adding to favorites ^_^ ~FATE the Piratekikyo_lovers_59 on January 30, 2006, 6:47:45 AM
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Love itbrent on January 26, 2006, 9:43:47 PM
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omfg u rule *+faves artist and story*--Tyler Nelson
Ichidou_Daisuke on January 24, 2006, 8:22:01 AM
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Dude, awesome poem. ^^ It just gave me inspiration to write my own. Shadow_Warrioress on November 19, 2005, 12:39:48 AM
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OMG, that is sooooo sad...yet beautiful...kudos to you...*is going to go tweak her slightly less sad poem so she can finally post it*pebbles_athina_bob on November 17, 2005, 4:04:44 AM
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im actually going to cry.......InvaderEriTheHomicadalManiac on November 16, 2005, 3:33:11 AM
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WOW, very cool! I liked it!Pliva on November 15, 2005, 6:09:43 AM
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So good! So good! faints!RickRaccoon on November 14, 2005, 9:07:43 AM
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Awsome job! i like poems and try to write em but eh im not that good. ROCK ON! ^,^Shion6 on November 14, 2005, 5:16:50 AM
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WOOWW!!! good poem!!! *favs*** You're really good!Mikagami on November 13, 2005, 2:23:45 AM
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Pweez comment on my art XD XD XDI'm serious your poem is awesome O.o
I really don't know what to say now. Really impressed by it....
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Great work *thumbs up*
Mikagami
Mandarb on November 12, 2005, 10:38:50 PM
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Note to self: Never listen to crazy frog while reading depressing poems. lol.It was good, though I got confused halfway through it. I haven't read a good piece of poetry in a long time That was really enjoyable. Thanks for the linkage. =3
AeroArtist on November 12, 2005, 10:34:17 PM
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wow. glad you got my attention for that. i loved it. i was a little redundant toward the end, but the story was great and it flowed like water. it was like a song almost. good job. felt like i was there.TheLittleGothofDisney on November 12, 2005, 10:26:50 PM
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Whoa, how talented are u?! *favesHallo-japanese-noodle on November 12, 2005, 3:54:49 PM
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WOW oh wow! I have a request can you write a love poem about murdoc niccals (gorillaz) and my oc if you dont know much about them read my fic murdoc is god! or what lies behind kong studios which i did with a friend ty\!MyoShenzo on November 12, 2005, 5:01:53 AM
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Wow! All I can really say is that was deep. Really deep. Madd props to ya! +faves!!!
OMG_U_killed_kenny on November 12, 2005, 12:35:02 AM
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that very deep and dark... i like it way much! :) thanx for asking me to read it! ^_^sis on November 12, 2005, 12:08:50 AM
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wow thats so deep!great job very nice i love it!*faves u*^^kittenzass on November 12, 2005, 12:04:52 AM
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I LOVE YOUR POEM ITS SO AWSOME!!!Majin_fuzzy_elf on November 11, 2005, 11:32:41 PM
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This is soooo awasome!And a little of bit sad...
You've got tellent =), keep up with the good work!
MarluxiaLuva on November 11, 2005, 11:28:22 PM
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goodful!!!!!!! kinda morbidHonjetan on November 11, 2005, 11:26:54 PM
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That's so sad...Does this have something to do with you, because it's really good. And sad. :(
BakaChan003 on November 11, 2005, 11:21:05 PM
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Oh my, that was very deep...and very good! So sad, though...alot of poems be sad, eh? Hopefully you get happy enough to write a poem about sunshine and bunnies and flowers and--!!! .......sorry sorry ^^; It was very good poem =DCharonTheSabercat on November 11, 2005, 11:15:45 PM
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Not bad, man (or woman, I don't know which). You got the rhyme scheme down pat, which seems to elude most "poets". A very very depressing piece, but a very very beautiful depressing piece. Nice job.sk8rchick131313 on November 11, 2005, 11:23:30 AM
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oh, wow thats gorgeous! really nice job and everything....yup, im gonna fave it!moonlitdemoness09 on November 11, 2005, 10:59:46 AM
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GARFLAHSABEJABEN!! this is so friggen awesome!! your poems are so good! this is so beautiufl...i nearly cried. *sniff* i love it so much! *favs a bajillion+2.7 times*