My book of poems
Submitted April 3, 2004 Updated July 18, 2004 Status Incomplete | since i can't make pictures currently (even though i stink at drawing -_-') I will make a book of poems this will get to be a big book 0.0
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Chapters
Chapters
Chapter 1 - My daydreams (humans)
Submitted: April 3, 2004 • Updated: April 3, 2004
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Chapter 3 - What become of dreams?
Submitted: April 4, 2004 • Updated: April 4, 2004
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Chapter 4 - Torture of life
Submitted: April 5, 2004 • Updated: April 5, 2004
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Chapter 5 - There's Hope For Talent
Submitted: April 6, 2004 • Updated: April 6, 2004
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Chapter 6 - d@*# judgement (lang,dark side)
Submitted: April 8, 2004 • Updated: April 8, 2004
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Chapter 7 - End it now!(violence)
Submitted: April 8, 2004 • Updated: April 8, 2004
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Chapter 8 - Filthy Men
Submitted: April 11, 2004 • Updated: April 11, 2004
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Chapter 9 - Upon A Mountain
Submitted: April 17, 2004 • Updated: April 17, 2004
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Chapter 10 - Let Me Be
Submitted: April 17, 2004 • Updated: April 17, 2004
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Chapter 11 - Request For My Bro
Submitted: April 23, 2004 • Updated: April 23, 2004
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Chapter 12 - Spring Cleaning
Submitted: April 24, 2004 • Updated: April 24, 2004
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Chapter 13 - The Devil
Submitted: April 26, 2004 • Updated: April 26, 2004
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Chapter 14 - Mother.....
Submitted: April 27, 2004 • Updated: April 27, 2004
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Chapter 15 - Oppisites Attract (Don't ask)
Submitted: April 30, 2004 • Updated: April 30, 2004
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Chapter 17 - Why Cherry Blossoms Fall
Submitted: May 8, 2004 • Updated: May 8, 2004
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Chapter 18 - Why Do We Cry
Submitted: May 16, 2004 • Updated: May 16, 2004
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Chapter 19 - Mirrors Lie
Submitted: May 22, 2004 • Updated: May 22, 2004
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Chapter 20 - Questioning
Submitted: June 1, 2004 • Updated: June 1, 2004
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Chapter 21 - Silent Crys
Submitted: July 18, 2004 • Updated: July 18, 2004
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currupted on August 25, 2004, 9:09:25 AM
currupted on (Chapter: 21)
it is a good poem i like it. it sounds like somethin i would write!!!! just dont end up depressed or something like that. GCrocker949 on July 31, 2004, 11:34:36 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 21)
awwwwwwwwwww dawn *hugs* i'm never around u.........so i kinda can't notice......and i'm not good @ that.......it's not good 2 keep things inside.......u shuld talk 2 some1.....i'm available.......if ya wanna.........or nay...but u don't hafta...awwwww...o....good poem.....i like the rymieness XDDGCrocker949 on June 19, 2004, 1:13:11 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 20)
it's good.....i likey...u always have such good poems..i try 2 read them all.....but sometimes.......i can'tGCrocker949 on June 19, 2004, 12:59:47 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 19)
lol...it's good.....like nay says....i wish i wish i was a fish....or in ur case...u wish u wish u were a fish.....good poemlil_wolfie_gone_bad on June 6, 2004, 5:10:57 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 20)
o.o very good dawny >^_^< as always keep it up!DarkDusk on May 27, 2004, 7:20:11 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 19)
yeah... I wrote this while thinking about all the pics peeps make and stuff and I had that song stuck in my head in the movie mulan by disney god I hate disney!!ShadowSquall6789 on May 13, 2004, 12:35:16 PM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 17)
very deep dawnie drop.....i like ur symbolizationDarkDusk on May 13, 2004, 12:30:01 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 17)
sometimes I don't even get my peoms *twitch twitch* well I guess I'm apologizing for the cherry blossoms or something I dunno don't ask just try to read between the linesGCrocker949 on May 10, 2004, 6:52:07 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 17)
OWWW...my brain hurts...i don't get itDarkDusk on May 7, 2004, 9:32:26 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 13)
YAY! me so glad people like my poems specially other poets!! yes humans are a plague and they must die so I am planning to kill all the humans in the world and everything they ever made including myself....... *sigh* unfortunatly it's judt a dream and it would never happen.Slippingthroughreality on May 7, 2004, 7:29:45 PM
Slippingthroughreality on (Chapter: 13)
Yeah i have this things against people as well so it makes me a hypocrite as well. I dunno how to explain but i just can't stand humanity. anyway This is such an amazing poem, when your read mine i came on over to take a look at yours and I'm happy i did because this is amazing. DarkDusk on May 6, 2004, 6:26:16 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 8)
-_-' I wasn't ralking to you a was talking to the stupid turkey it was gonna drown itself anywaysDarkDusk on May 6, 2004, 6:22:58 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 13)
A hypacrit is someone who hates things that they are (do)... so I say I hate humans but I am a human so I'm a hypacritDarkDusk on May 6, 2004, 6:19:04 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 16)
you guys like it 0.0 kool they like a poem in which I gave them a stuffed monkey which was really a bomb juat so they couldn't get married!! *finds this shockingly surprising* o well I guess people theese days have their reasons *twitch twitch*GCrocker949 on May 5, 2004, 7:04:24 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 16)
awwwwwww...dawn...THANX....SO MUCH...i luv it *huggieness*ShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:06:35 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 15)
WEEEEEEEEEE?ok
ShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:05:48 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 13)
wats a hypocrit?ShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:05:27 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 12)
well dats a given wit u dawn dropShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:04:36 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 9)
yea so dats where ur eccentricness(a word u most likely dont kno) comes fromShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:03:53 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 8)
i cant help it geezwhen will u learn
dont make me pull out ma gunblade
ShadowSquall6789 on May 5, 2004, 3:02:58 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 16)
wait there is sumthin i can do.....beg......
great poem i like it and will hold it closest ta ma heart.
hee
DarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:26:42 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 15)
weeee ok I will you wrote a poem like this eeeeeeee so uberly cool!!DarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:17:52 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 13)
thanks I know I hate humans!! (I am such a hypacrit sp?)ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 11:15:42 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 15)
i really like dis one cuz i wrote a similiar poem and stuffkeep it up dawn drop
DarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:15:10 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 12)
I dunno I'm going insane again XDDarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:11:41 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 9)
yes I was born in da mountains YAY! for some reason I brag about it kinda strange ya'? kinda strangeDarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:10:26 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 7)
yup I love this poem shows mah suicidal side XP I mean uhh...... me not scuicidal *hides knife behind bakShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 11:09:09 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 13)
yea i agree wit dat alotnice poem
DarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 11:04:53 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 6)
thank you!!! but I do think it is a bit much but though it is curse a fied it is true like all mah poems uhhhhh sorta i've seen better I can not wite poems but I try!!ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 9:19:52 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 12)
cheesy poems rock thenXP he could use it but y would he
ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 9:16:55 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 11)
yea dat is tru how do ya ryhme like dat?o well great poem
ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:50:48 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 10)
i would like to kno wat goes on hereneways nother great poem
ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:38:39 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 9)
born in da mountains eh?watever i like dis poem
DarkDusk on May 4, 2004, 8:32:18 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 8)
lol what's wrong your not afraid of me are you *holds knife behind back* well I gotta a surprise for you! *pulls aout knife* now I'm gonna show you how I feel! *stabs a turkey* STOP ACTING SO STUPID!ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:28:12 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 8)
ummm.....nice poem....*runs*ShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:26:46 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 7)
yet another great poem but i dunno wat i would od witout r crzy sense of humorShadowSquall6789 on May 4, 2004, 8:25:01 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 6)
i must agree was it neccesary for ya to curse so muchbut i agree wit its subject and its great
DarkDusk on April 27, 2004, 11:47:22 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 11)
yes we like all the fluffy animals Yeesh kianna you just rhme by like putting in a line and figuring what rhymes with that word and what sentence you can use with that word is it really that hard you silly girl.. the title was part of the "moon song" sooo yeah and fluffy animals are cute *pokes fluffy animals* XD YAY! DarkDusk on April 27, 2004, 9:25:32 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 12)
YAY! yes well I was bored I think it's a cheesy poems but who cares XDRukira on April 27, 2004, 8:19:00 AM
Rukira on (Chapter: 1)
duuude... Thats great! I really like it! I agree too... nice moral x3GCrocker949 on April 24, 2004, 12:59:54 PM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 12)
yea...spring cleanin sux...not like i ever actually do it...but bsides that...u just g2 do it and then u can play....wit me...YAY *huggieness*GCrocker949 on April 24, 2004, 12:53:52 PM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 11)
YAY...fluffy animals r kool...and...how do u rhyme like that?!?!...i wanna rhyme like thatlil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 24, 2004, 5:12:29 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 10)
maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatt T.T don't bring that up!lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 24, 2004, 5:04:12 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 11)
FLUFFY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DarkDusk on April 23, 2004, 9:09:36 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 10)
YAY!mah sissys pasta! tis a true culinary artist!^^ but she acts like she's everything oh well she's nice like the time she took us to the movies to see scooby doo with...*sniffles and crys* waaaaaaaaaaaaahDarkDusk on April 23, 2004, 9:06:42 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 9)
Yes *pokes brother* Go write your own Danm Poems! :X oops what the lorax? I think I might read that book "I am the lorax I speak for the trees I speak for the trees for the trees have no tongues And I'm asking you sir at the top of my lungs" such a kind lorax and I hate that stupid once-ler at least her learned his lesson at the end oh what sure I'll do your stupid poem for science ^^ so easily persauded! ^^lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 23, 2004, 8:22:03 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 10)
yeesum erin is mean sometimes T.T ooooooh she can be so fricken annoying and rude... but she makes great pasta *cheesy smile* XDlil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 23, 2004, 8:18:47 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 9)
yesh ^_^ you are da almighty mountain ruler!!!!!!^^ weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! ....oh yea..... awesom poem as always.... o and tell ur brother to wrght his own poems! ^^ Ta-Ta *poof*DarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:30:25 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 3)
lol I never thought of my poems being humorous and well in that line I was thinking about drugs and little childrens show and then thus the magic school bus XPDarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:27:16 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 4)
No your my worst enemy!(sarcasm) Of course your my friend! *huggy* have you gone insane your not aloud to be insane only I amDarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:22:28 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 8)
lol yeah I hate em all thus the poem! I was originally planning to write how fathers are cruel to their families and how wives are slaves and how white men still think they are better than everyone else even after Martin luther king Jr.DarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:18:35 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 9)
Yeah most people don't believe me when I say I was born in the mountains actually after camping up there and hiking I love mountains I feel one with it..... I was born on top a mountain and therefore bound to it ahhhhh so...poetic!DarkDusk on April 22, 2004, 12:12:49 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 10)
ummm kianna it's just a poem...... I wrote this when I was pissed and my teachers and sisterGCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:37:08 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 10)
AWWW *crys*...dawn it's ok...*turbo huggieness* me and nay both love u VERY much...and we always will *huggieness*GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:33:32 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 9)
AWWW...i'll help u *huggieness* it's ok...yea...that's right...u were born in the mountains.... nay told me....kool....so...yea
GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:30:40 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 8)
u said it...again...so tru...men suck *sticks toung out @ guys* women rule *dances around* oh yea...we rule ((don't ask))GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:28:11 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 7)
AWW..i care about u *huggieness* ....dawn always scares me (no offense)GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:25:01 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 6)
u said it dawn *high fives dawn* yea...u culda cursed a lil less...but owell...we all curse...lolGCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:17:09 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 4)
hey..i'm ur friend 2?...right?...maybe not ur best friend..but i am ur friend...right? *huggieness*GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:14:42 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 3)
i like ur poems...they're good....and sometimes there's lil funny lines like..."So it's like we're riding a magical bus"...that's funny...i wish i was riding a magical bus..it'd fly and zoom...YAY!!!...ZOOM((don't ask))GCrocker949 on April 22, 2004, 2:09:37 AM
GCrocker949 on (Chapter: 1)
i wuv it dawn...u write great poems *huggies* ((don't ask y i hugged u...i dunno))YAY ((don't ask about that either))DarkDusk on April 14, 2004, 6:40:08 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 7)
thankies!LJmouse on April 11, 2004, 11:54:12 PM
LJmouse on (Chapter: 7)
O___O wowie.... so powerful... thats really good....DarkDusk on April 8, 2004, 9:55:30 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 7)
lol yes I knowlil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 8, 2004, 9:58:39 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 6)
lol ya think?! :Plil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 8, 2004, 9:58:15 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 7)
*blink blnk* dawnie wawnie you scare me at times... 0.0 lolDarkDusk on April 8, 2004, 5:16:16 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 6)
LOL yeah I did in like every line huh? guess i got a littl carried away hehehelil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 8, 2004, 4:33:03 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 6)
think you could have cursed any more?DarkDusk on April 7, 2004, 4:02:31 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 4)
Yea i share hugles with every one *hugs shadowsqual*lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 7, 2004, 12:18:39 PM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 5)
we're REALLY close friends sorta like sistersShadowSquall6789 on April 7, 2004, 5:52:03 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 5)
sis???? aw well another great one DarkDuskShadowSquall6789 on April 7, 2004, 5:50:13 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 4)
awww....can i be ur best friendit involves gettin a hugglez
ShadowSquall6789 on April 7, 2004, 5:48:58 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 3)
hey ur poetry is goodi wuv it
ShadowSquall6789 on April 7, 2004, 5:47:35 AM
ShadowSquall6789 on (Chapter: 1)
ur poems have such poetry jus ignore wat i said
DarkDusk on April 6, 2004, 3:09:27 PM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 5)
*hug* yes I know *pats back for 2 seconds* it's all gonna be alright ok.lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 6, 2004, 3:06:34 PM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 5)
*sniff sniff* Thanks sis *wipes tears* i'll try..don't worry dawn i'll try *sniff sniff hugglez tears still coming*DarkDusk on April 5, 2004, 9:42:28 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 3)
Yes and I love socks and cows and pigs and monkeys and poems and...shutting up nowDarkDusk on April 5, 2004, 9:35:47 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 4)
*hug* your my best friend! *says in wierd voice*lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 5, 2004, 5:20:41 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 4)
this sounds something like your life.. you go through to many things! it's not nice! *hugglez* don't worry thats why your friends are here ^^lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 5, 2004, 5:18:36 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 3)
^^yes i love drawing ^^lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 5, 2004, 5:18:04 AM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 1)
just got on :P and look at it and yay i wuv your poems ^^DarkDusk on April 5, 2004, 4:41:31 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 3)
Hey your good at poems to. But I spend more time on poems is all like you spend more time drawing.DarkDusk on April 5, 2004, 4:39:19 AM
DarkDusk on (Chapter: 1)
*hugglez* when did you get on to read this thanks Nay!lil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 4, 2004, 12:51:53 PM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 3)
sun you never cease to amaze me wit your poems :Plil_wolfie_gone_bad on April 4, 2004, 12:49:21 PM
lil_wolfie_gone_bad on (Chapter: 1)
AW i wuv it sun ^^