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Chapter 1 - Love?

It's a love story.O.O
Sorry some typos....

Chapter 1 - Love?

Chapter 1 - Love?
I always hated him.I hated him since I first saw the love of my life meet his eyes.I saw the look in her eyes and knew she loved him.HIM!I swoe that I would kill that man,that when I was finally through that she could not love him.You think me mad?So be it.I killed him.I succeded in tearing his heart from his chest-A fitting end to him.But I did not realize the true extent of her love for him.She saw my act,and screamed,"Why?Why did you do this!?"And with those words,she took his blade and thrust it through her own chest.I AM MAD,but I am no liar.This story that I have penned by this gttering candle,on December 20,1009 is true.Just ask her,Sitting by my side all bandaged up,with not a robe nor flame able to warm her from the darkness of death.

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The-Ragdoll-Sally on February 12, 2006, 9:18:41 AM

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The-Ragdoll-SallyAwwwies this is sooo sad and deep *cries* u r sooo very good at writting stories ^^

Kratosgirl14 on February 12, 2006, 9:16:41 AM

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Kratosgirl14XD wow..very good!

Living_Dead_Girl on February 12, 2006, 9:08:24 AM

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Living_Dead_Girl*favs*

Living_Dead_Girl on February 12, 2006, 9:08:10 AM

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Living_Dead_GirlWOW! That is really good! I agree with what the others said! This is a very good story! I can't stand love bc it is dumb, so that makes this even cooler to me.

FullMetal_D on February 12, 2006, 8:51:03 AM

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FullMetal_DCool chapter. You have a way with words.

xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on February 12, 2006, 7:31:34 AM

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xxKILLtheSYSTEMxxthis is reallygood!!! Keep up the work you have a nac for storys!