Chapter 1 - Love?
Submitted February 12, 2006 Updated February 12, 2006 Status Incomplete | It's a love story.O.O Sorry some typos....
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Chapter 1 - Love?
Chapter 1 - Love?
I always hated him.I hated him since I first saw the love of my life meet his eyes.I saw the look in her eyes and knew she loved him.HIM!I swoe that I would kill that man,that when I was finally through that she could not love him.You think me mad?So be it.I killed him.I succeded in tearing his heart from his chest-A fitting end to him.But I did not realize the true extent of her love for him.She saw my act,and screamed,"Why?Why did you do this!?"And with those words,she took his blade and thrust it through her own chest.I AM MAD,but I am no liar.This story that I have penned by this gttering candle,on December 20,1009 is true.Just ask her,Sitting by my side all bandaged up,with not a robe nor flame able to warm her from the darkness of death.
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Rachel_Ronbinson on June 25, 2006, 10:53:47 AM
It's really Dark...I love it! ^_^ *fave*becky on March 8, 2006, 10:13:33 PM
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This is very good keep it up!*faves story*Dark_Asakura on March 4, 2006, 2:18:04 AM
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YAY!WOOOOOOOOO!GO ME!Yaoi_Boyz_Queen on February 16, 2006, 8:37:03 AM
Niiiiice. I liked it. You have typos, but then again, so do I. Anyone that flames for that, diserves to be killed with a keyboard! *huggles* nicely done, very vivid. *grins* Here! *gives you a cookie*Lumin on February 14, 2006, 8:39:33 AM
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how strangely vivid... love itRage_the_demon_alchemist on February 14, 2006, 5:38:48 AM
i like!keep up da good work iight?Metalbeast on February 14, 2006, 5:34:20 AM
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This is very awesome!!! Whooo!!! Awesome story!!!!!!!infurno on February 13, 2006, 10:44:00 AM
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this sounds Good. Keep it up.Tierra on February 13, 2006, 9:53:20 AM
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Woah!! o_O thats very good akes me think of a sotry called Tail Tale Heart thats very good favs^^ thanx 4 the comment^^Trinity_Fire on February 13, 2006, 12:12:02 AM
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Hm, it is rather interesting... Not bad, though it is short and something longer would be nice. :)If it's nothing to do with shaman king, then you should put it under original or maybe the writing category of misc, there's a section there for romance...
Interesting.
Keep up with your work, it's good. :)
Hakkohu_Fuko_Lover on February 12, 2006, 10:57:35 PM
I love it very cool and scary.Faves story and you.Haru_Shikiguni on February 12, 2006, 10:55:11 PM
FAVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ricky_rules on February 12, 2006, 10:49:23 PM
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DUDE!Very nice I love the deepness of it!favesDemon_dude on February 12, 2006, 10:47:12 PM
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Dude this is great!I love it!faves big time dude!Lord_Hakkohu on February 12, 2006, 10:45:57 PM
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This is is great.I rally like it!*faves*sis on February 12, 2006, 10:42:13 PM
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I LOVE IT!It rocks it's very deep and sad.It scarys me a little!FAVES!XDKittyduck on February 12, 2006, 8:43:42 PM
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I love the dark atmosphere of it. Wonderful short story, my friend!RickRaccoon on February 12, 2006, 2:18:49 PM
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wow awsome job. i agree with fullmetal, u do have a way with words. love can be very cruel and confusing. hope to see more work from you. Rock on!manga_cat_girl on February 12, 2006, 9:52:24 AM
thats an awsome story! keep up the good work!Atems_Little_Girl on February 12, 2006, 9:33:04 AM
WOW! That is very good and sad story! ^-^ The-Ragdoll-Sally on February 12, 2006, 9:18:41 AM
Awwwies this is sooo sad and deep *cries* u r sooo very good at writting stories ^^Kratosgirl14 on February 12, 2006, 9:16:41 AM
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XD wow..very good!Living_Dead_Girl on February 12, 2006, 9:08:24 AM
*favs*Living_Dead_Girl on February 12, 2006, 9:08:10 AM
WOW! That is really good! I agree with what the others said! This is a very good story! I can't stand love bc it is dumb, so that makes this even cooler to me.FullMetal_D on February 12, 2006, 8:51:03 AM
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Cool chapter. You have a way with words.xxKILLtheSYSTEMxx on February 12, 2006, 7:31:34 AM
this is reallygood!!! Keep up the work you have a nac for storys!