Beware
Submitted August 7, 2004 Updated August 7, 2004 Status Incomplete | Beware All You Don`t Know What Lies...
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Chapter 1 - Beware
Submitted: August 7, 2004 • Updated: August 7, 2004
Word count: 66 • Size: <1k • Comments: 4 • views: 106
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Malevolent_Templar on December 23, 2004, 7:30:21 PM
Malevolent_Templar on (Chapter: 1)
I like the dark out look to it, it gives an idea of shadow, painful past, your work is good u should do moreRhymer_Dante on November 23, 2004, 1:30:15 PM
Rhymer_Dante on (Chapter: 1)
I'm left near speechless...but yes, "Beware Of The Blood, It Drips From The Sky, To Swallow Us Hole, So No One Survives." does sound so freakin' cool. I love it ^_^!! Make more soon!!! BTW i don't have ne more pixie sticks sry
tiler_james on November 16, 2004, 10:25:00 AM
tiler_james on (Chapter: 1)
Again, another good poem, I especially like this one ^_^ But it woudl be easier if there was puncuation ^^; And I agree; "Beware Of The Blood It Drips From The Sky To Swallow Us Hole So No One Survives" Does sound totally kool ^_^cookies_are_yummy16 on August 10, 2004, 4:21:20 PM
cookies_are_yummy16 on (Chapter: 1)
Hello!!! Love the part where "Beware Of The Blood It Drips From The Sky To Swallow Us Hole So No One Survives" It sounds so cool! See ya!