Chapter 1 - Please understand me,

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Please understand me,

Author
Eggplant

Submitted
July 12, 2004
Updated
July 12, 2004
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Chapters: 1
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Words: 225
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I made this one at 12-07-04 and uhm.. well it's a poem *cough cough*

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Category: Miscellaneous » Writing » Poetry

Chapter 1 - Please understand me,

I’m waiting anxiously
Till the moment you discover me
Please find out who I am
Please try your hardest to understand
Analyse the situation of this woman
Analyse what on earth is going on
In my head, it hurts so much
Painful memories, dark thoughts
I can’t see through them anymore
They’re blocking my emergencydoor
I’m trapped inside this burning body
Can you be the fireman who saves me
Be the guidestick for the one who can’t see
Be the protection preventing me from going insane
Could you be all that and still stay the same
Could you be all that and not be afraid of the pain?
If I seek protection under your wings
Won’t you fly away when tough times begin?
Give me certainty which I need the most
Assure me you won’t tell on as my secrets start to show
I trust you to not betray my state of mind
that even when you can’t handle it anymore you won’t leave me behind
I’m sorry if I drag you into this, I didn’t mean to
I’m sorry that I chain myself to you
But I can’t let you go, now that I felt your warmth
I can’t let you go, you gotta stay with me as you sworn
Please find out who I am,
Please try your hardest to be my friend.

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StephAlanPoe on August 2, 2006, 2:46:44 AM

eeeeeeeeee! i love this poem so much! Can I print it out and stick it on my wall of fame? It RULES...

StephAlanPoe on July 24, 2006, 4:54:24 AM

OMG! I must have read this, like, 20 times now....
And every time I read it, it just keeps getting better and better. Makes me cry every time too, but thats what I like about it. n.n

StephAlanPoe on June 26, 2006, 3:18:59 AM

*agrees with dj_gamer_girl*

cept this story is like me and mah imagianary friend. Joe.

*glomps Joe* I WUVVV YOUUUUU!

I love this poem. I shall make it my duty to pilgrimage to it whenever i feel lonesome.

Meg_Moo on August 18, 2005, 2:33:51 PM

That is amazing!!!!

Freckled_Pancakes on August 9, 2005, 8:07:43 AM

*cries* that's so good! i loved it! keep up the good work.

bek-ee on June 24, 2005, 3:38:08 PM

hey thats good, keep writing (and drawing) i'll be chearing for you. =3

dj_gamer_girl on May 21, 2005, 9:50:59 PM

i...i...thats so...whaaaaaaaaaa!
i cry everynight.
coz i fell no one cares about me but my angel!!!
allen is the angel that helps me!! humans are breakin my heart

ShadowOfDarkness on October 2, 2004, 2:13:11 AM

*claps like a mentle-case* wooooooooo! go Eggplant!
... i dunno why but i cant help coming back every now and then to read this poem... its sooo good!

Eggplant on September 23, 2004, 7:54:44 AM

thanks so much *blush*

*bow*

Anime-Chick on September 23, 2004, 4:53:43 AM

If that's the case..i'll be your friend!!! you can't have enough friends right?? and i love it! i really really really reaaally do!! your my fav writer and this is my fav poem!

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