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What happens when Jak gets killed? The worst day of Daxter's life. Warning: Sad.



Chapter 1 - Desperation
Submitted: December 19, 2005 • Updated: December 19, 2005
Word count: 2138 • Size: 12k • Comments: 3 • views: 195


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DeAtH_fIrE on June 26, 2006, 4:09:46 AM

DeAtH_fIrE on (Chapter: 1)
DeAtH_fIrEMaybe i'm a dork but that almost made me cry! you did an awsome job. and i was wondering if you didn't mind if i could draw a picture for this story?
plz reply on mi profile.


SimpleSoul52 on January 13, 2006, 1:36:27 AM

SimpleSoul52 on (Chapter: 1)
SimpleSoul52hm . . interesting. But not satisfying. Jak should've suffered more to make his death more dramatic. I suggest you do an alnernate ending to this chapter.

Tankmaster on December 27, 2005, 1:46:14 PM

Tankmaster on (Chapter: 1)
Tankmasterwow this is sad but oddly good