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Chapter 1 - Us And A Angel

well i had to make this in school

yet i really liked it even though it had to be a prepasitional poem

(great voc)

Chapter 1 - Us And A Angel

Chapter 1 - Us And A Angel
Us And A Angel

Along the lush, dark 100 green grass, we walked
Beside me, stood a true golden hearted friend
On the other side, was our guardian angel
At midnight sharp, with stars so bright
With happyness that warmed our hearts, we ran across the lake
Towards the other side, we saw a loner
Until we gently walked, towards this person
Infront of us, this unknown broken hearted person sat
Without hesitation, we sat and comforted this person
Around and around, the hands went on the old clock
Until dawn came, we parted
Within time, we would wait till dusk
Into the yellowish/golden shining clouds, the guardian angel left
Down went the sun as we ran towards the shallow peacful lake
Unlike others, us four stick together

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Tuxedo_Mini_Mask on August 10, 2007, 1:57:22 PM

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Tuxedo_Mini_MaskIN KNOW!!!! It's about your friends at school that don't Hate you =D YAY!!! lol

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 10, 2007, 2:09:56 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderguess ur giving up

its me and you with the angel and zack(loner)

FallOutGirlAARHinder on August 10, 2007, 1:59:09 PM

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FallOutGirlAARHinderno think again Leo

think a whole lot deeper

only 1 of my friends are in this

the Angel doesnt count in this

ill tell u the loner though

its my friend Zack

yes were still friends

we broke up a long time ago and it doesnt matter anymore