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Chapter 1 - Sunny

This was written for a contest ay school and i would love to know what u think of it...Its about a boy and a lost love

Chapter 1 - Sunny

Chapter 1 - Sunny
Sunny

Sunny was a good boy, did exactly what he was told
Listened, helped and loved his parents as both of them grew old
But when the day came along when they had passed away
He seemed to fade a little bit with each and every day
He didn't get to say his goodbye
Without them his tears he did deny
He tried to forget he's still caught in the past
He couldn't change the way he felt, why did these feeling last?
The day came along when he thought of what do to,
Drown his tears in a beer His own misguided brew
Then he got in a fight, and stole the car
He hit a pole with out getting far
Red a blue lights flashing all around
He couldn't move a muscle and couldn't make a sound
"I don't think we can save him" said some tear drowned eyes
"Please don't let him fade away, don't tell me these lies"
Lying in twisted ruble, His blood all over the floor
He hope he can live threw through this,he want to love once more
His breaths are getting shorter, as his eyes began to blur
One last call to close it.'' He fading to fast sir"
Locked inside a darkened room, trapped inside my mind
Staring into his own past, starting to realize
The mistakes he made were his fault, and his parent weren't that far
"I do not want to follow, not to where they are"
All his life he wondered, how he would turn out
Now his future is in danger, it is in doubt
When Sunny awoke, to his surprise
Every one around him had tear-filled eyes
"I'm sorry we cannot save you, it has been to long"
"No you are not serious, this is all so wrong"
See Sunny couldn't move, no family were there to see
How much he wanted to live, how much he wanted to be
"Sunny I am sorry; your life is almost done"
"The doctor, were fighting a battle, the other people won"
"Your heart is fading quickly, sadly you cannot move"
"You are paralyzed from the neck down there is nothing you can prove"
Tears fell from sunny's eyes, like rain from a cloud
But his sobs became silent, they didn't make a sound
He fell into a deep sleep where he cannot wake up
His soul began to slip away, like water out of a cup
The plug was pulled and he was gone just like the fading moon
At least he will see his parents very, very soon
3 years later, in the graveyard we know see
The love and togetherness of a peaceful family
Side by side each of them lay
Loving each other to the end of time, Forever they will stay
Sunny was a good boy did exactly what he was told
Listened helped and loved his parents as bopth of them grew old
He lost his mind when hi parent's died. he couldn't pull away
How he is happy in hid coffin, where he will eternally say

This poem has a meaning in the end i hope you can tell
Live life to the fullest and live it very well
Tell the ones you love. You love them today
Because you never know when you wont wake up, to see another day

By:Fatal_dreamer
( Jamie Reynolds)

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