Chapter 7 - Why?!
Submitted August 28, 2005 Updated February 6, 2006 Status Incomplete |
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Chapter 7 - Why?!
Chapter 7 - Why?!
WHY?!
You left the clan,
You can never come back.
You'll fight for something you believe is right,
When you were wrong all along.
How could this be?
Was this all a mistake?
How can you find out if you are right or wrong?
With so many questions how can there be only one answer?
No one knows for sure,
We're all just paws waiting for are master's next move.
Blades clash,
And church bells ring.
One shall die and no one will care.
What if he was one of your own?
Would you then feel sorry for him?
No one cares for anyone anymore.
They're all just self-centered fools.
At least I care you fought your battle…
BUT WHY DIDN'T YOU WIN?!
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StoneColdRaven on November 14, 2005, 9:45:16 AM
THIS IS VERY UNIQUE BUT YOU NEED TO THINK MORE ABOUT THE FEELING OF THE POEM INSTEAD OF THE DESCRIPTIONS, BUT GREAT USE OF WORDS AND VERSE.