My poetry
Submitted August 28, 2005 Updated February 6, 2006 Status Incomplete |
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Chapters
Chapter 1 - Life is so short if a devil you keep
Submitted: August 28, 2005 • Updated: August 28, 2005
Word count: 215 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 178
Chapter 2 - The day I cry to an Angel
Submitted: August 28, 2005 • Updated: August 28, 2005
Word count: 217 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 174
Chapter 3 - Ascending from Heaven
Submitted: August 28, 2005 • Updated: August 28, 2005
Word count: 188 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 176
Chapter 4 - The ever pure white Angel
Submitted: August 28, 2005 • Updated: August 28, 2005
Word count: 184 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 163
Chapter 5 - A Vampire's Love
Submitted: November 6, 2005 • Updated: November 6, 2005
Word count: 466 • Size: 2k • Comments: 2 • views: 166
Chapter 6 - Listening....
Submitted: November 10, 2005 • Updated: November 10, 2005
Word count: 194 • Size: <1k • Comments: 1 • views: 129
Chapter 7 - Why?!
Submitted: November 10, 2005 • Updated: November 10, 2005
Word count: 306 • Size: 1k • Comments: 1 • views: 168
Chapter 8 - Through Syrus's eyes
Submitted: November 10, 2005 • Updated: November 10, 2005
Word count: 276 • Size: 1k • Comments: 3 • views: 174
Chapter 9 - I'll take you down!
Submitted: November 14, 2005 • Updated: November 14, 2005
Word count: 346 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 187
Chapter 10 - Take my hand
Submitted: November 17, 2005 • Updated: November 17, 2005
Word count: 316 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 175
Chapter 11 - A Bad Dream
Submitted: November 25, 2005 • Updated: November 25, 2005
Word count: 364 • Size: 1k • Comments: 0 • views: 167
Chapter 12 - Chrono & Rosette
Submitted: January 9, 2006 • Updated: January 9, 2006
Word count: 485 • Size: 2k • Comments: 1 • views: 184
Chapter 13 - Tell me what you think this poem is about
Submitted: February 2, 2006 • Updated: February 2, 2006
Word count: 187 • Size: <1k • Comments: 0 • views: 166
Chapter 14 - Haku...
Submitted: February 6, 2006 • Updated: February 6, 2006
Word count: 592 • Size: 2k • Comments: 0 • views: 123
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CrystalKitsune357 on January 4, 2009, 11:19:41 AM
Very good. I love it!totallyspies31 on March 4, 2006, 2:48:32 PM
Hiya. Just me. This was alright. I sort of suck at poetry, but this takes the cake. I never you did poems. I should've looked hard before. Maybe I can do something like this. Nah, I suck at poetry. Well, this and the others were good. I decided to read this one last. If you make a sequal, have Sasuke and Haku in it, and I will make mine Me, Jaden, Syrus and Zane. Maybe Blood. I dont know. If you are on, get a hold of me. Im on all night long. Night!!!!GenisSage13 on January 9, 2006, 12:04:24 PM
Please be polite when you comment on this poem! It took a lot for me to deside to post it due to it making me cry everytime I read it and it just means a lot to me. Just think of it as a tibute to Chrono and Rosette! Thank You! StoneColdRaven on November 14, 2005, 9:53:27 AM
SYRUS WHo???? I GUESS IT ISNT SPELLED LIKE IRIS.. THIS ONE HAS TRUE FEELINGS BEHIND IT DONT BE AFRAID TO SHOW THEM (FEELINGS) OR EVEN TO EXPAND ON THEM IN YOUR POETRY. StoneColdRaven on November 14, 2005, 9:47:05 AM
THIS POEM MAKES ME FEEL REALLY SAD IT IS VERY DARK, BUT I CAN FEEL THE PERSONS TRUE THOUGHTS AND THIS ALMOST HAS A SECRET MEANING TO IT HUH?? GREATStoneColdRaven on November 14, 2005, 9:45:16 AM
THIS IS VERY UNIQUE BUT YOU NEED TO THINK MORE ABOUT THE FEELING OF THE POEM INSTEAD OF THE DESCRIPTIONS, BUT GREAT USE OF WORDS AND VERSE.