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Chapter 1 - Experience It First Hand.

This is dramaqueen101's request about Judgement Day.

Chapter 1 - Experience It First Hand.

Chapter 1 - Experience It First Hand.


Judgment Day



I was numb to all words that may have been unspoken.

I was so desperate I prayed to never be unveiled.

I was left abandoned as I lay, tattered and broken.

I was crying out to seraphim that had previously failed.



The smothered night tasted of blood, and was tainted with fear.

The empty souls of all mortals were howling to be saved.

The world tried to avoid what they knew was already here.

The fools tried to alter a prophet that was already engraved.



I was witnessing all this as I choked back my own dread.

I was trying to memorize all that I could not understand.

I was counting my own tears that never could shed.

I was disturbed at how all this could've been planned.




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keera_punked_out on January 29, 2006, 6:02:02 AM

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keera_punked_outWow. Such poetic words are hard to rhyme, but you got it down.

RickRaccoon on January 10, 2006, 10:03:34 AM

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RickRaccoonvery nice. you did a great job on the rhymes. Rock on

TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:36:57 AM

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TsunachiSpiritHolderwow this is awsome it is the greatist ever

Xe on December 19, 2005, 10:24:47 AM

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XeOmigeez.. I love this! O.O So pwnsome, maaan. ^w^
Wow, you have such better skillz than I do. UI couldn't ever think of something so awesome. x3

dramaqueen101 on December 18, 2005, 9:21:45 PM

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dramaqueen101This is awesome, I love it! It had kind of an abrupt ending though. But it's still a wicked poem! Thank you!