Judgment Day.

Chapter 1 - Experience It First Hand.
Submitted: December 19, 2005 • Updated: December 19, 2005
Word count: 133 • Size: <1k • Comments: 5 • views: 209

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keera_punked_out on January 29, 2006, 6:02:02 AM

keera_punked_out on January 29, 2006, 6:02:02 AM (Chapter: 1)

Wow. Such poetic words are hard to rhyme, but you got it down.

RickRaccoon on January 10, 2006, 10:03:34 AM

RickRaccoon on January 10, 2006, 10:03:34 AM (Chapter: 1)

very nice. you did a great job on the rhymes. Rock on

TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:36:57 AM

TsunachiSpiritHolder on January 1, 2006, 9:36:57 AM (Chapter: 1)

wow this is awsome it is the greatist ever

Xe on December 19, 2005, 10:24:47 AM

Xe on December 19, 2005, 10:24:47 AM (Chapter: 1)

Omigeez.. I love this! O.O So pwnsome, maaan. ^w^
Wow, you have such better skillz than I do. UI couldn't ever think of something so awesome. x3

dramaqueen101 on December 18, 2005, 9:21:45 PM

dramaqueen101 on December 18, 2005, 9:21:45 PM (Chapter: 1)

This is awesome, I love it! It had kind of an abrupt ending though. But it's still a wicked poem! Thank you!