Chapter 1 - Untitled

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love in life

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Inuyasha_Demon_Boy

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July 1, 2005
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inu's thoughts after kikyo pinned him to the tree...his final thoughts.
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Chapter 1 - Untitled

Love in LIFE

My life is over,
i'm dead by her love
But i'll remember her smile
In the shawdows of my death
Our love came first
It always came first
And she was beautiful
But now I can't see her
I was blinded by my greed
and now I have nothing
but time.

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Narutos_luver_forever on January 26, 2006, 3:51:34 AM

OOOOH i really like this poem it's awesome!!!!

scooter_girl_Haruko on January 25, 2006, 8:21:02 AM

hey my sis red tis. she wants to comment. here it ish: tis is scooter_girl_Haruko's sis i just wanted 2 say your poem is so sad and i loved it. .:cries:.

scooter_girl_Haruko on January 25, 2006, 8:16:56 AM

wow! its reely touching. *cries* i love it. o ya im gonna e-mail ur bro and explain to him y i sent him tat e-mail. *cries some more*

Razieljr83 on January 22, 2006, 6:57:40 AM

Its very good!

Alisa on January 20, 2006, 6:20:31 AM

AWW, It's so lovely:D

Little_Miss_Anime on January 17, 2006, 8:33:28 PM

Beautiful!
Very...haiku-like ^^

raysbabygal on January 13, 2006, 6:29:29 AM

aww this is so cute! *soob*
if only kikyo heard this thought! ;)

_VBDz_ on January 11, 2006, 5:05:26 AM

so beautiful! I LOVE IT

The_Swayz on December 15, 2005, 8:59:22 AM

That's a lovely poem ^-^

kikyo1267 on December 13, 2005, 7:11:10 AM

i love this you wite more please more like a story or something take look at my storys

dulce on December 5, 2005, 5:36:20 AM

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sis on November 20, 2005, 5:34:05 AM

wow very deep!great job!^^

mikita_inugirl on November 17, 2005, 1:25:03 AM

Good job. I like the poem.

Tommy_Boy on October 14, 2005, 7:18:54 PM

OMG this is so sweet, i cant wait till u make more. Oh u made me cry *hugs plushie* (Favs)

GIRL_WITH_DREAMS on September 29, 2005, 5:38:06 AM

omg that was so lovely *wipes tear from eye* keep it up as this is realy brill

love_bunny on September 26, 2005, 7:52:32 AM

Beautiful ^-^

Broken-Heart on September 21, 2005, 7:04:48 AM

This is deep. If you need some ideas, look at my poems.They are almost like this one.

Draco_chick on September 11, 2005, 12:15:53 PM

very nice. *nods*

Hawaiiancat on August 21, 2005, 9:28:14 AM

this is good!!!

myoathkeeper on August 12, 2005, 8:42:57 AM

wow! that was sooo touching! I loved it!

MelodicCascade on July 31, 2005, 10:37:28 AM

its ... so ... touching! ::cries::

beautifully done!

TidusLuver on July 26, 2005, 4:52:13 AM

Wow ... THAT'S REALLY AWESOME!!!! KEEP UP DA GOOD WORKIES ^_^

LuLu_Bell on July 23, 2005, 1:39:46 PM

*crys* SO BEAUTFUL!!!!i will put this on my favs and never take it off!

PimpShadow on July 22, 2005, 1:21:44 PM

Oh wow O.O

JamesMarsters on July 21, 2005, 12:55:09 PM

Hi, just wanted to say your on my faves.

CranberryZorroRaz on July 20, 2005, 1:59:56 PM

That's so pretty.. I love it!! ^^

Lanathae on July 18, 2005, 6:40:45 AM

aww that's so cute ^^!

Muffin on July 17, 2005, 11:04:46 AM

wow! is so pretty continue doing poems ;)

theGhostofInuYasha on July 1, 2005, 3:29:42 PM

Hey kk! Good job on the poem.
*favez*

Inuyasha_Demon_Boy on July 1, 2005, 12:40:01 PM

Yah! this is my first poem PLEASE! like it thank you