Chapter 1 - The War
Submitted June 20, 2006 Updated October 15, 2006 Status Complete | A poem which I made (that should scare you, haha)
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Chapter 1 - The War
Chapter 1 - The War
The War
Seeing the shade come closer
Darkness made its way
A neverending silence
Nothing else but grey
Sinking in the darkness
One roar to the light
Letting day disappear
In the eyes of night
Fields of nothing
No reason can be found
Far, vague shades
Falling to the ground
Shaded faces
Darkened eyes
No returning daylight
Just a wave of lies
No rejoining harmony
No relieving smiles
Nothing else but lonelyness
Going there for miles
Looking into waterdrops
The reflection of what I see
Will this war ever end
In the inside of me?
Seeing the shade come closer
Darkness made its way
A neverending silence
Nothing else but grey
Sinking in the darkness
One roar to the light
Letting day disappear
In the eyes of night
Fields of nothing
No reason can be found
Far, vague shades
Falling to the ground
Shaded faces
Darkened eyes
No returning daylight
Just a wave of lies
No rejoining harmony
No relieving smiles
Nothing else but lonelyness
Going there for miles
Looking into waterdrops
The reflection of what I see
Will this war ever end
In the inside of me?
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Izzymii on October 14, 2006, 4:21:54 AM
Izzymii on
Yay! white stripes gone!odysseygirl on September 6, 2006, 3:28:15 AM
odysseygirl on
its a really wonderful poem, with a twist that made me go back and read it again. it puts it in a different light. really well done.likestodraw on June 20, 2006, 6:19:38 AM
likestodraw on
that poem is...is...beautiful. it realy expresses the way you feel. you are a talented artist and poet.